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  1. Posted: July 19, 2014In: Public

    A dog-headed novice leaves his monastery at the command of the elder to capture and tame the remaining mythological beasts which threaten 4th century Jerusalem.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 19, 2014 at 6:35 am

    A challenge to your logline is that the time setting is one very few people are likely to know anything about. On the other foot, the obscurity of the period gives you greater creative license to make whatever you want with the confusing history and multiplicity of legends. Seems to me a better focuRead more

    A challenge to your logline is that the time setting is one very few people are likely to know anything about. On the other foot, the obscurity of the period gives you greater creative license to make whatever you want with the confusing history and multiplicity of legends.

    Seems to me a better focus might be to do an origin story on St. George as the protagonist with Christopher as his sidekick/ally. (With St. George as the focus, you can better work in the “B” story of the rescue of the maiden.) Make it buddy/bromance film. In the style of a “Monty Python” send up of the period and people.

    fwiw.

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  2. Posted: July 19, 2014In: Public

    A dog-headed novice leaves his monastery at the command of the elder to capture and tame the remaining mythological beasts which threaten 4th century Jerusalem.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 19, 2014 at 6:35 am

    A challenge to your logline is that the time setting is one very few people are likely to know anything about. On the other foot, the obscurity of the period gives you greater creative license to make whatever you want with the confusing history and multiplicity of legends. Seems to me a better focuRead more

    A challenge to your logline is that the time setting is one very few people are likely to know anything about. On the other foot, the obscurity of the period gives you greater creative license to make whatever you want with the confusing history and multiplicity of legends.

    Seems to me a better focus might be to do an origin story on St. George as the protagonist with Christopher as his sidekick/ally. (With St. George as the focus, you can better work in the “B” story of the rescue of the maiden.) Make it buddy/bromance film. In the style of a “Monty Python” send up of the period and people.

    fwiw.

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  3. Posted: July 14, 2014In: Public

    In a world where fictitious characters and mankind co-exist equally, a stressed-out-psychotic film director filming his latest movie, fires, his egomaniacal narrator, a pixy, who purposely sets out to sabotage his movie.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 19, 2014 at 5:57 am

    The logline doesn't make sense to me without establishing the context, "a world where fictitious characters and mankind co-exist". Who is the protagonist, the director or the pixy? What's at stake that I should care about who wins, who loses?

    The logline doesn’t make sense to me without establishing the context, “a world where fictitious characters and mankind co-exist”.

    Who is the protagonist, the director or the pixy? What’s at stake that I should care about who wins, who loses?

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