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  1. Posted: July 18, 2014In: Public

    After a womanising snowboarder tricks a vengeful witch into sleeping with him by making outlandish promises, she curses him and the only cure is to fulfill every one of his deceptive vows.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 18, 2014 at 11:54 pm

    So, it's outlandish promises, now, instead of threats of self-destructive acts per version 1.0? If so, that makes more sense. But I do have a problem with the lack of specificity. What was the nature of the vows? Did he make them to her, that is, was she to be the beneficiary? Why else would she falRead more

    So, it’s outlandish promises, now, instead of threats of self-destructive acts per version 1.0? If so, that makes more sense.

    But I do have a problem with the lack of specificity. What was the nature of the vows? Did he make them to her, that is, was she to be the beneficiary? Why else would she fall for the con? Why else would she respond so strongly to his failure to follow through?

    I presume the guy is the protagonist but I gotta wonder: what kind of witch would fall for the bait? What character flaw of hers did his con hook into? As a character, I find her more interesting than the guy. Snowboarders –even womanizing ones — are not uncommon and unique — but a witch?

    And does the plot pivot on his being a snowboarder? He’s a manipulative, womanizing guy — isn’t that enough for the purpose of the logline?

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  2. Posted: July 18, 2014In: Public

    After a womanising snowboarder tricks a vengeful witch into sleeping with him by making outlandish promises, she curses him and the only cure is to fulfill every one of his deceptive vows.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 18, 2014 at 11:54 pm

    So, it's outlandish promises, now, instead of threats of self-destructive acts per version 1.0? If so, that makes more sense. But I do have a problem with the lack of specificity. What was the nature of the vows? Did he make them to her, that is, was she to be the beneficiary? Why else would she falRead more

    So, it’s outlandish promises, now, instead of threats of self-destructive acts per version 1.0? If so, that makes more sense.

    But I do have a problem with the lack of specificity. What was the nature of the vows? Did he make them to her, that is, was she to be the beneficiary? Why else would she fall for the con? Why else would she respond so strongly to his failure to follow through?

    I presume the guy is the protagonist but I gotta wonder: what kind of witch would fall for the bait? What character flaw of hers did his con hook into? As a character, I find her more interesting than the guy. Snowboarders –even womanizing ones — are not uncommon and unique — but a witch?

    And does the plot pivot on his being a snowboarder? He’s a manipulative, womanizing guy — isn’t that enough for the purpose of the logline?

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  3. Posted: July 16, 2014In: Public

    The lives of an undefeated boxer and a former hitman intermingle on the corrupt and sinful streets of New Orleans as they join forces to save the they love city and the people in it from cataclysm

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    Added an answer on July 17, 2014 at 8:20 am

    (Spoiler alert) Uh, given the way natural events played out in 2005, they failed, didn't they? What could any mere mortals have done to save The Big Easy from the hurricane? I just don't understand what the story is.

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    Uh, given the way natural events played out in 2005, they failed, didn’t they?

    What could any mere mortals have done to save The Big Easy from the hurricane? I just don’t understand what the story is.

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