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?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??
Better yet, Valentin. >>there is a sense that she is directly responsible to saving the day. Agree, It can take a team effort to solve a problem, but the usual role of the protagonist is to come up with the final piece that solves the puzzle. There is a possible exception that comes to mind, the movRead more
Better yet, Valentin.
>>there is a sense that she is directly responsible to saving the day.
Agree, It can take a team effort to solve a problem, but the usual role of the protagonist is to come up with the final piece that solves the puzzle.
There is a possible exception that comes to mind, the movie “Apollo 13”. It truly took a team effort to bring the 3 astronauts back alive. And, ironically, the character who comes through with the final solution that enables the 3 astronauts to return safely is the astronaut who got bumped from the mission because he was exposed to German measles.
Even so, the Tom Hanks character is tagged as the main character who frames the story. As flight commander, he was always the one in charge in outer space, and often thinking one step ahead of events. And the Ed Harris character, the NASA Flight Director, was always the one calling the shots, making the tough calls from mission control on earth.
However, that movie was based on true events, familiar events to all the studio suits director Ron Howard and producer Brian Grazer pitched the project to. They weren’t burdened with the task of having to explain the story.
See less?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??
[BTW Presario2000, I am an equal opportunity offender. My character flaw is a deficiency of tact when it comes to vetting loglines and plots. FWIW: what appeals to me in your story is the presence of a FEMALE protagonist. Not enough of them in log lines, nor in action-thriller movies and series. I wRead more
[BTW Presario2000, I am an equal opportunity offender. My character flaw is a deficiency of tact when it comes to vetting loglines and plots.
FWIW: what appeals to me in your story is the presence of a FEMALE protagonist. Not enough of them in log lines, nor in action-thriller movies and series. I want to see more; that’s why I’ve got your story on the rack. No comfort, to be sure, but there it is. You are welcome to advise me to bugger off and stuff my opinions where the sun doesn’t shine at any time!]
See less?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??
>>She provides the intel, others take care of the computer virus. So she herself doesn't have to directly solve the problem she discovers? What the heck does the story need her for, then? It looks like she's a failure, not a hero. Whatever intel she had did NOT prevent the attack. Now it seems likeRead more
>>She provides the intel, others take care of the computer virus.
So she herself doesn’t have to directly solve the problem she discovers? What the heck does the story need her for, then? It looks like she’s a failure, not a hero. Whatever intel she had did NOT prevent the attack. Now it seems like others have to clean up the mess she didn’t prevent.
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