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  1. Posted: January 28, 2014In: Public

    ?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 31, 2014 at 2:04 pm

    I know that already. (And I've read SunTzu -- have you?) Do you know the distinction between PsyOps and PsyObs? Her job doesn't explain why she is on that sub, why she would be doing a CLINICAL psychological evaluation of a crew -- that ain't what PsyOps is about.

    I know that already. (And I’ve read SunTzu — have you?)

    Do you know the distinction between PsyOps and PsyObs? Her job doesn’t explain why she is on that sub, why she would be doing a CLINICAL psychological evaluation of a crew — that ain’t what PsyOps is about.

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  2. Posted: January 28, 2014In: Public

    ?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??

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    Added an answer on January 31, 2014 at 2:00 pm

    Also, your log line buries the lead. That is, there is more at stake in the virus attack than mere personal vengeance by an ex, right?. There is a larger military and/or political issue at stake as well, yes? Well, it should be the lead stakes in the log line (The personal vengeance would be a plot-Read more

    Also, your log line buries the lead. That is, there is more at stake in the virus attack than mere personal vengeance by an ex, right?. There is a larger military and/or political issue at stake as well, yes? Well, it should be the lead stakes in the log line (The personal vengeance would be a plot-plus factor, a reveal in the course of the story).

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  3. Posted: January 28, 2014In: Public

    ?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??

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    Added an answer on January 31, 2014 at 1:41 pm

    Most people here seemed to have tripped over the word PsyOps and I expect it will be the case in the larger sea of fish. What the heck is PsyOps? I tripped over it because it doesn't make sense to me for a PsyOps specialist to be tasked with a PsyObs assignment. Yes, I read your explanation way backRead more

    Most people here seemed to have tripped over the word PsyOps and I expect it will be the case in the larger sea of fish. What the heck is PsyOps?

    I tripped over it because it doesn’t make sense to me for a PsyOps specialist to be tasked with a PsyObs assignment. Yes, I read your explanation way back when, but I’m not buying it. The primary mission of PsyOps is to engage in psychological manipulation — propagandize — not to do clinical PsyObs evaluations,, determine whether or not a diverse crew can co-exist, hold hands and sing “Kum ba yah” day after day 100 fathoms under water.

    PsyOps and PsyObs are not equivalent and interchangeable tasks. So there’s that.

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