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?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??
>> I am working on a movie idea Then present us with a log line for a movie ONLY, a log line that stands alone, on its own legs, that requires no knowledge of, no reference to any other movie, or series for us to understand.
>> I am working on a movie idea
Then present us with a log line for a movie ONLY, a log line that stands alone, on its own legs, that requires no knowledge of, no reference to any other movie, or series for us to understand.
See less?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??
In terms of tailoring a log line specific to NCIS, I don't know for the reasons already stated. Almost all the log lines posted here are for spec scripts not associated with an already established series or franchise. They stand on their own, not on the shoulders of a series or franchise. Yours is aRead more
In terms of tailoring a log line specific to NCIS, I don’t know for the reasons already stated. Almost all the log lines posted here are for spec scripts not associated with an already established series or franchise. They stand on their own, not on the shoulders of a series or franchise. Yours is an exception, a specialty item.
One thing I do know for sure is that the last line is problematical. “Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything?? The plot predicament or stakes should never be posed as a question in a logline. (Although, obviously, It’s implied in a declarative statement of the plot premise.)
See less"After a struggling writer’s sister is kidnapped by deranged script writer, he’s given 24 hours to create the perfect logline for the maniacs new screenplay, or his sister dies!"
You exemplar also gives the stakes (do or die) and has a ticking clock (24 hours). But I think the maniac should kidnap the struggling writer. That way, the story can have lots of intense, one-on-one, eyeball-to-eyeball arguments and debate between the protagonist and antagonist. (Uh, you aren't thaRead more
You exemplar also gives the stakes (do or die) and has a ticking clock (24 hours).
But I think the maniac should kidnap the struggling writer. That way, the story can have lots of intense, one-on-one, eyeball-to-eyeball arguments and debate between the protagonist and antagonist.
(Uh, you aren’t that deranged writer, are you, Richiev? Walmart is working out for you?) 🙂
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