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?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??
Better. But... this brings up another issue that has always mystified me. There's a mismatch between her job description/skill set and the immediate, urgent crisis on the sub: she a PsyOps specialist, a psychological warrior, not a computer hacker, a cyber warrior; she doesn't have the skill set toRead more
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But… this brings up another issue that has always mystified me. There’s a mismatch between her job description/skill set and the immediate, urgent crisis on the sub: she a PsyOps specialist, a psychological warrior, not a computer hacker, a cyber warrior; she doesn’t have the skill set to debug the system.
See less?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??
There you go again referencing the series! So write for the story you want to write for the series. The producers for the series will understand your log line without you having to provide a lengthy explanation. Good luck. The only other suggestion I have is that the log line has to say what Ms. RyaRead more
There you go again referencing the series! So write for the story you want to write for the series. The producers for the series will understand your log line without you having to provide a lengthy explanation. Good luck.
The only other suggestion I have is that the log line has to say what Ms. Ryan will — MUST – do about the problem. Your current iterations only give an inciting incident — she discovers there’s a problem. A log line has to go further than saying a character discovers a problem; it has to state what she must do about it.
See less?Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything??
But you still haven't given a good reason for her to be on board for the reasons cited. Also, I believe it's forbidden by Federal law for a government agency -- military or civilian -- to engage in PsyOps on American citizens (except in a declared state of national emergency and then for limited purRead more
But you still haven’t given a good reason for her to be on board for the reasons cited.
Also, I believe it’s forbidden by Federal law for a government agency — military or civilian — to engage in PsyOps on American citizens (except in a declared state of national emergency and then for limited purposes). So she is in violation of Federal law by practicing PsyOps mojo on American crew members — if that is the reason she is on board the sub.
But again, a clinical evaluation is not PsyOps, so she has no business being on board the sub for that purpose.
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