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  1. Posted: December 8, 2013In: Public

    After being lost at sea in the Bermuda Triangle and then finding themselves in an otherworldly gallery of paintings that become portals to strange worlds and other dimensions, will an unlikely group of teen misfits be able to band together long enough to find the door that leads them home, or will the sinister evil that brought them to this new reality keep them entrapped there forever?

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    Added an answer on December 9, 2013 at 5:35 am

    Who is the alpha-character (aka: protagonist) who must take the lead in organizing the misfits?

    Who is the alpha-character (aka: protagonist) who must take the lead in organizing the misfits?

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  2. Posted: December 8, 2013In: Public

    (TV) Dangerous Exploits follows a young man's journey from a womanizer to a brilliant sociopathic manipulator, starting with his graduate studies of psychology at Arizona State University.

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    Added an answer on December 9, 2013 at 1:53 am

    Journey through what occupation? (Politics or show business are the 2 natural fits-- the streets of Washington DC and Hollywood are littered with men who fit the description. He'd fit right in.) As defined, he doesn't seem to me to come off as an inherently sympathetic character. So what's to keep tRead more

    Journey through what occupation? (Politics or show business are the 2 natural fits– the streets of Washington DC and Hollywood are littered with men who fit the description. He’d fit right in.)

    As defined, he doesn’t seem to me to come off as an inherently sympathetic character. So what’s to keep the audience tuned from one week to another? Does he have any redeeming characteristics? (Like Dexter in the Showtime series who is a serial killer — but sublimates and only kill the bad guys.)

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  3. Posted: December 2, 2013In: Public

    When a many-times-jilted long-distance truckie falls in love online with a city writer, he must learn to trust again, to win her heart.

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    Added an answer on December 9, 2013 at 12:46 am

    Okay, that can happen. But backing up a plot beat or two. They first meet online before they talk on the phone, right? So: What's the psychological button pushed in their initial low-risk, online contact that causes them to cross the threshold (per the terminology of the "Hero's Journey") to the morRead more

    Okay, that can happen. But backing up a plot beat or two. They first meet online before they talk on the phone, right? So:

    What’s the psychological button pushed in their initial low-risk, online contact that causes them to cross the threshold (per the terminology of the “Hero’s Journey”) to the more emotionally perilous contact of voice to voice where the romantically magic moment happens?

    Anyway, best wishes with your story. It’s topical and has intriguing possibilities.

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