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A bullied kid has 1 dream: to become the next big thing in soccer. But what he doesn't know is that there will be sacrifices to make.
Fear of being bullied is the raw material for a sufficient character flaw and challenge to overcome to realize his dream but the description of the dream itself needs to be more concrete and specific than the next big thing.? What does that mean? For example, as he is a "kid", his dream could be toRead more
Fear of being bullied is the raw material for a sufficient character flaw and challenge to overcome to realize his dream but the description of the dream itself needs to be more concrete and specific than the next big thing.? What does that mean?
For example, as he is a “kid”, his dream could be to make the team, lead it to a championship season.
See lessWhen a highly-successful psychologist saves a man on the street from suicide, she decides she isn't helping enough people who really need it, and starts a "mobile therapist" ride company, counseling strangers from pick-up to destination; until one-day she accepts a fare across country from a man with real demons to confront.
>>>this man who has serious issues to work through Like what? The logline is vague. It lacks a specific problem and a specific objective goal. And what's at stake? That is, what does her client stand to lose if he fails to respond to her therapy? The teenager in "Ordinary People" (1980) hasRead more
>>>this man who has serious issues to work through
Like what? The logline is vague. It lacks a specific problem and a specific objective goal.
And what’s at stake? That is, what does her client stand to lose if he fails to respond to her therapy?
The teenager in “Ordinary People” (1980) has a very specific “serious issue”: the impulse to commit suicide because of guilt and anger over the death of his brother in a boating accident. The stakes are as high as they get: his life. He’s already tried to commit suicide once, he may try again.
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Are you trying to launch another super-hero franchise? Or is this story a one trick, one ride pony?
Are you trying to launch another super-hero franchise? Or is this story a one trick, one ride pony?
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