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  1. Posted: October 17, 2013In: Public

    A troubled young woman from a dysfunctional family drags her father into a world of incest and revenge after the murder of her mother and brother.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 17, 2013 at 8:11 am

    Correction: the daughter is the protagonist. But who is the antagonist?

    Correction: the daughter is the protagonist. But who is the antagonist?

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  2. Posted: October 17, 2013In: Public

    A troubled young woman from a dysfunctional family drags her father into a world of incest and revenge after the murder of her mother and brother.

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    Added an answer on October 17, 2013 at 4:16 am

    Who is the protagonist? Who is the antagonist (that is, do they know who the killer is)?

    Who is the protagonist? Who is the antagonist (that is, do they know who the killer is)?

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  3. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'

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    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 10:54 pm

    Here is my way of looking at it at the story as described: The purpose of the logline is to describe the ONE primary action of the story toward ONE objective goal. The action of this story is the struggle toward the objective goal of bringing the guilty to justice. Embedded in the action is a moralRead more

    Here is my way of looking at it at the story as described:

    The purpose of the logline is to describe the ONE primary action of the story toward ONE objective goal. The action of this story is the struggle toward the objective goal of bringing the guilty to justice. Embedded in the action is a moral premise in the form of a thesis (positive value and corresponding action) and an antithesis (negative value and corresponding action).

    The thesis (positive valence) of the moral premise is worked out in the 2nd act by the action to get justice in a corrupt system. That action ends in failure.

    Now, the protagonist pursues the SAME objective goal by the antithesis of the moral premise: he takes matters into his own hands. Call it revenge, but revenge is personal justice, street justice — it is still the pursuit of justice.

    So what you have is a story that explores the two aspects of one moral premise, two strategies toward one principle objective goal: bring the guilty to justice.

    fwiw.

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