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When a man\'s world is shattered by a tragic accident, He will have to learn to be strong and fight or risk losing everything.
I have been asking for specifics because writing loglines is not a poker game where you hide your cards until the call and then show your winning hand. It's an exercise in salesmanship. Which means that in the logline itself you need to offer readers something specific, interesting, different that wRead more
I have been asking for specifics because writing loglines is not a poker game where you hide your cards until the call and then show your winning hand. It’s an exercise in salesmanship. Which means that in the logline itself you need to offer readers something specific, interesting, different that will grab attention, hook interest.
See lessA desperate bipolar woman goads her reneging boss for a radio announcing slot; unsuccessful, she must find a worth beyond achievements before she kills him and loses everything.
After being denied a promotion, a bipolar woman must cope with deep depression and resist the overwhelming urge to murder the man who wouldn't promote her. (25 words) Carlton: I don't what "must find a worth beyond achievements" is supposed to mean. If it means what I think it means, I've yet to meeRead more
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Carlton: I don’t what “must find a worth beyond achievements” is supposed to mean. If it means what I think it means, I’ve yet to meet a person afflicted with severe bipolar disorder who could pull him/herself up by her own psychological bootstraps without medication, therapy, or support groups.
Suffice it to say, the character “flaw” is a wellspring of potential conflict and complications. I hope you will research the disorder thoroughly and get it right.
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See lessWhen a man\'s world is shattered by a tragic accident, He will have to learn to be strong and fight or risk losing everything.
Okay, but loglines are littered with "tragic accidents", replete with characters who "must learn to be strong and fight, well-stocked with "everything to lose" stakes. What is there about your story that makes it stand out from the herd?
Okay, but loglines are littered with “tragic accidents”, replete with characters who “must learn to be strong and fight, well-stocked with “everything to lose” stakes.
What is there about your story that makes it stand out from the herd?
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