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A fledging actress, unlucky in love, must decide whether to risk it all or play it safe for the “happily ever after” she wants.
Okay, that clarifies. First time, I've read a story line where an LDS missionary guy is a "date from hell" :-) As I understand your story, I perceive a problem with your protagonist: Hollyweird types are attracted to stories about characters who take the biggest risks for their biggest dream, who woRead more
Okay, that clarifies. First time, I’ve read a story line where an LDS missionary guy is a “date from hell” 🙂
As I understand your story, I perceive a problem with your protagonist: Hollyweird types are attracted to stories about characters who take the biggest risks for their biggest dream, who won’t settle for less, who don’t make safe choices.
The character can start out weak and willing to settle for less, for a safe choice. But the character arc that appeals to them is one where she develops the inner strength to risk all for love, to go for what she really wants in life.
What does she really, really want? What is her biggest dream? Who is the incarnation of her biggest dream?
See lessA carefree college student attempts to host a huge party for his friends during the initial days of a zombie outbreak.
>>> Evil Dead 2 and Night Of The Living Dead And the unity of action in both films is that the characters are fighting for their lives against zombies. What is the unity of action, aka: through line, aka: spine of your story?
>>> Evil Dead 2 and Night Of The Living Dead
And the unity of action in both films is that the characters are fighting for their lives against zombies. What is the unity of action, aka: through line, aka: spine of your story?
See lessA rural Kansas family believes that love conquers all and good will always win out over evil until their daughter meets a young combat soldier with a bright future just as Iraq is breaking out.
So, you conceive her objective goal is to live a virtuous life which she thinks will be rewarded by the safe return of her daughter's soldier boyfriend (or husband)? That's her religious faith? And she lives a virtuous life only to have everything go wrong in her family and around her? Sounds like aRead more
So, you conceive her objective goal is to live a virtuous life which she thinks will be rewarded by the safe return of her daughter’s soldier boyfriend (or husband)? That’s her religious faith?
And she lives a virtuous life only to have everything go wrong in her family and around her?
Sounds like a modern day version of the Book of Job.
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