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  1. Posted: August 23, 2013In: Public

    A rural Kansas family believes that love conquers all and good will always win out over evil until their daughter meets a young combat soldier with a bright future just as Iraq is breaking out.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 24, 2013 at 2:32 am

    It's a character virtue to be compassionate and concerned about others, to wish them happiness and success. But it is a character flaw to be emotionally dependent, on others; to have one's happiness contingent on the happiness and welfare of others. But again, that's a subjective issue. Ditto with "Read more

    It’s a character virtue to be compassionate and concerned about others, to wish them happiness and success. But it is a character flaw to be emotionally dependent, on others; to have one’s happiness contingent on the happiness and welfare of others.

    But again, that’s a subjective issue. Ditto with “widening her world view”; not only is it subjective, it’s not her dramatic goal. It’s not something she desperately wants to amend, revise, or abandon for a “wider her world view”. Rather she wants to defend and preserve her narrow and na?ve and illusionary world view against harsh reality. Defending a “narrow world view” doesn’t work as an objective goal because: 1] it’s fundamentally a subjective need; and 2] it’s passive and reactive.

    The question in my mind is: what is a specific objective goal (person, place or thing) that she actively and outwardly (you can see the struggle right there on the screen) struggles to obtain?

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  2. Posted: August 23, 2013In: Public

    When a man\'s world is shattered by a tragic accident, He will have to learn to be strong and fight or risk losing everything.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 24, 2013 at 2:07 am

    Please be more specific: What is the "tragic accident"? What is the "everything" he "risks losing"? And rather than "learn to be strong and fight", all you need say is that he has to fight (or struggle). It's implicit that he will learn to be strong as he struggles.

    Please be more specific:
    What is the “tragic accident”?
    What is the “everything” he “risks losing”?

    And rather than “learn to be strong and fight”, all you need say is that he has to fight (or struggle). It’s implicit that he will learn to be strong as he struggles.

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2013In: Public

    A young widow's son is kidnapped by a serial killer and will only be freed if she finishes his final murders and thus giving him an alibi.

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    Added an answer on August 24, 2013 at 12:05 am

    Are the serial killer's victims, male or female?

    Are the serial killer’s victims, male or female?

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