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  1. Posted: July 4, 2013

    A mafia wife assumes control and seeks revenge for her husband?s murder, and when she discovers her daughter is pregnant by the son of the charming, handsome killer, she pursues a different path that forces her to come to terms with her own blossoming feelings for him.

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    Added an answer on July 4, 2013 at 8:52 am

    "assumes control" -- not sure what that means? She takes charge of the mafia family or...? Anyway: A ruthless mafia widow who initially vowed to avenge her husband's death finds herself falling in love with the charming assassin.

    “assumes control” — not sure what that means? She takes charge of the mafia family or…?

    Anyway:

    A ruthless mafia widow who initially vowed to avenge her husband’s death finds herself falling in love with the charming assassin.

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  2. Posted: July 3, 2013In: Public

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    Added an answer on July 4, 2013 at 4:05 am

    When an ex-luchador discovers his runaway daughter has been forced into prostitution, he fights a human trafficking ring to rescue her. Tempted to add: "in the United States". It increase the word count, but it also increases the difficulty facing the luchador: he's got to get across the border befoRead more

    When an ex-luchador discovers his runaway daughter has been forced into prostitution, he fights a human trafficking ring to rescue her.

    Tempted to add: “in the United States”. It increase the word count, but it also increases the difficulty facing the luchador: he’s got to get across the border before he can begin to battle the traffickers.

    I think the premise has promise. Luchadores are popular figures in Latin America. In sports, they are fighters in the ring; in folklore, they are fighters for the downtrodden. And human trafficking is a very real, very serious problem.

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  3. Posted: July 3, 2013In: Public

    In order to settle a large debt, an exiled hit man agrees to a dangerous but lucrative assassination in Vegas, where nothing goes to plan after he realizes he’s been conned by his estranged brother-in-law.

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    Added an answer on July 4, 2013 at 2:33 am

    Don't think you need "known as 'The Kid'" Isn't the con a discovery, not the inciting incident? Who's the antagonist, the brother-in-law or the drug lord? What are the ultimate stakes? Just paying off the debt with the hit job. Or paying with his life if he refuses -- or fails?

    Don’t think you need “known as ‘The Kid'”

    Isn’t the con a discovery, not the inciting incident?

    Who’s the antagonist, the brother-in-law or the drug lord?

    What are the ultimate stakes? Just paying off the debt with the hit job. Or paying with his life if he refuses — or fails?

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