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  1. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    In order to avoid a lengthy prison sentence, a baobhan sith agrees to work with an anti-vampire organization whose sole mission is to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 7, 2013 at 6:13 am

    Supernatural -- I like!

    Supernatural — I like!

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  2. Posted: June 5, 2013In: Examples

    Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 11:15 pm

    Hitchcock on the distinction he makes between mystery and suspense: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Xs111uH9ss Hitchock says in that clip that he never made a mystery. But "The Birds" is a mystery to me in the sense that I never am told why the birds are attacking or what finally happens with them.Read more

    Hitchcock on the distinction he makes between mystery and suspense:

    Hitchock says in that clip that he never made a mystery. But “The Birds” is a mystery to me in the sense that I never am told why the birds are attacking or what finally happens with them.

    The best single sentence I have ever read on plotting is: “The plot is a conspiracy against the protagonist.”

    “I Confess” is an good example, a plot the conspires against a priest to turn his virtue, his vow, into
    a “flaw”.

    In “Liar, Liar” the virtue of absolute honesty is imposed upon the lawyer because of his real character
    flaw, his tendency NOT to tell the truth.

    A plot can conspire to turn a minor, seemingly innocuous flaw into a major problem. Thus,Indiana Jones is given a minor “flaw”, a phobia for snakes. As in “Jaws”, the plot conspires to make it a major problem, forcing him to overcome his phobia for the sake of the objective goal.

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    In order to avoid a lengthy prison sentence, a baobhan sith agrees to work with an anti-vampire organization whose sole mission is to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 9:58 pm

    Maybe: To avoid a "death by daylight" sentence, a notorious female vampire must help a law enforcement task force capture vampires of her ilk and infamy. Whatever, the reason I suggest amping up the character and mission is because I sense not only an entertaining movie -- but a motherload movie; toRead more

    Maybe:

    To avoid a “death by daylight” sentence, a notorious female vampire must help a law enforcement task force capture vampires of her ilk and infamy.

    Whatever, the reason I suggest amping up the character and mission is because I sense not only an entertaining movie — but a motherload movie; to wit, a franchise. So think big. As they say in baseball, swing for the bleachers with this one.

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