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An egotistical detective fights to save his reputation when a series of religious killings threaten to show the community his true colours.
It's not just a matter of clarity, it's a matter or marketing: the linkage of the crimes to the 10 commandments is your story schtick, your hook, a premise that distinguishes your story from the 1,001 other serial murder mystery scripts piled up script reader's desks.
It’s not just a matter of clarity, it’s a matter or marketing: the linkage of the crimes to the 10 commandments is your story schtick, your hook, a premise that distinguishes your story from the 1,001 other serial murder mystery scripts piled up script reader’s desks.
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Since you only have 25 words or so -- and fewer seconds -- to grab and hold a reader's attention, I think it is advisable to be more "on the nose" on some details. But, of course, there are no hard and fast rules of how "nosey" to be. The desired goal of a logline is to hook my interest with a greatRead more
Since you only have 25 words or so — and fewer seconds — to grab and hold a reader’s attention, I think it is advisable to be more “on the nose” on some details. But, of course, there are no hard and fast rules of how “nosey” to be.
The desired goal of a logline is to hook my interest with a great concept, an irresistable twist. If the “miracle cure” turns the patient into a “murderous psychopath” that keens my curiosity; I want to know more. Where as “murderous appetite” only confuses me.
And I’m still confused.
See less?Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors are sent against their will on the internet to spread an elusive virus and must prevent ?Villains? of leading the world into a backward of forty years.?
Hackers "kidnap" and infect famous cartoon characters, now deployed as wildly popular phone apps, with a lethal virus that will bring down the Internet unless their ransom demands are met. Still awkward, but closer, methinks, to the current state of Internet technology and marketplace.
Hackers “kidnap” and infect famous cartoon characters, now deployed as wildly popular phone apps, with a lethal virus that will bring down the Internet unless their ransom demands are met.
Still awkward, but closer, methinks, to the current state of Internet technology and marketplace.
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