1. Posted: June 6, 2013In:

    In order to avoid a lengthy prison sentence, a baobhan sith agrees to work with an anti-vampire organization whose sole mission is to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

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    I am intrigued by the premise. But I had to google "baobhan sith". (I'm better versed in classical mythology than pop mythology.) I don't know how much of a stumbling block that would be to Hollyweird types reading the logline. You may want to tweak:e. "A baobhan sith, a female vampire, agrees..." ARead more

    I am intrigued by the premise. But I had to google “baobhan sith”. (I’m better versed in classical mythology than pop mythology.) I don’t know how much of a stumbling block that would be to Hollyweird types reading the logline. You may want to tweak:e. “A baobhan sith, a female vampire, agrees…”

    And why not up the ante to a death sentence by exposure to sunlight rather than a lengthy prison sentence

    So:

    To avoid capital punishment (death by exposure to daylight) a baobhan sith, a female vampire, must work with an anti-vampire organization to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

    But then, I got to thinking: if you’re to up the ante of her punishment, that entails a commensurate upping the ante (risks and stakes) of her “probationary public service”. Something like she must cooperate in hunting down, incarcerating and killing if necessary rogue vampires who are a lethal criminals. Like she once was.

    So then I got:

    To avoid capital punishment (death by exposure to daylight) public enemy #1, a baobhan sith, a female vampire, must work for a government program to capture other vampires of her ilk and infamy.

    Ramdomly associating. But I suggest you pour on the barbecue sauce and turn up the heat.

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2013In:

    Desperate to cure her husband's terminal illness, a young socialite turns to an enigmatic scientist whose treatment works – but leaves the patient with a murderous appetite.

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    Could the woman seek the cure for her own terminal illness? In that way, as the protagonist, she would be more directly confronting the enigmatic scientist. (Hubby could still be there as an ally and/or collateral damage.) Just a thought.

    Could the woman seek the cure for her own terminal illness? In that way, as the protagonist, she would be more directly confronting the enigmatic scientist. (Hubby could still be there as an ally and/or collateral damage.)

    Just a thought.

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  3. Posted: June 1, 2013In:

    Here's just the concept, not an actual logline What if currency never existed ? but instead we had to trade memory's ? Our whole life's are basically memory's, we never live in the present. So what if, in the future, all of society traded in run down memory's, stored in banks. The higher class members of society are ridden with memory's. Then you have the lower class people, left to rot on the street with no memory's what so ever. There is a corrupt government which steals taxes of memory from you every month, and if you run out of memory's, you are taken in to cell 5, also known as shutdown to be 'rehabilitated'. If you want a loaf of bread that would cost you a mere memory of the last 5 minute road trip, new Aston martin ? that could cost you up to a months worth of memory's, even more. Many of you may look at this concept and think ''what a load of shit'' but it's still early days, as i'v only just started developing it. Any constructive criticism will be great !

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    What about the memory exchange as a black market industry -- like meth, heroin and cocaine? And for the same reason, they are potent mind f***kers. Addictive; and you take your chances with the quality and purity of the memories. (After all it's an unregulated market). You can have great trips downRead more

    What about the memory exchange as a black market industry — like meth, heroin and cocaine?

    And for the same reason, they are potent mind f***kers. Addictive; and you take your chances with the quality and purity of the memories. (After all it’s an unregulated market). You can have great trips down “memory lane” — or nightmares.

    (Now about that memory of sex with a famous actress, Richiev? Name the actress and name your price!)

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