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  1. Posted: April 26, 2013In: Public

    "A former modesty blaise hitman, now a seemingly warm hearted grand ma agrees to teach a ice princess how to fight, when one of her gay friends gets smashed by her criminal ex-boyfriend and she now must stop him before the one she loves becomes the victim of his jealousy/ control needs"

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    Added an answer on April 28, 2013 at 12:04 am

    Twilight, Is your dramatic trajectory one of unintended consequences: that is the retiree starts out only wanting to help the young girl defend herself, but ends up turning her into a hit woman in her own right?

    Twilight,

    Is your dramatic trajectory one of unintended consequences: that is the retiree starts out only wanting to help the young girl defend herself, but ends up turning her into a hit woman in her own right?

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  2. Posted: April 23, 2013

    After convincing his reformed felon brother to hold up the bank where the map to a lost goldmine is stored, a disenchanted insurance salesman must finish the job himself when his brother is shot dead by the obstinate bank manager during the heist

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    Added an answer on April 26, 2013 at 11:31 am

    "ex con bro teaches geeky younger bro the art of the heist, but when the ex con bro is killed in heist and geeky bro must find the courage to save the day?" Hmm, do I sense the makings of a logline? A seed of a plot? IMHO, a good logline triggers the imagination. Maybe not with same story ideas youRead more

    “ex con bro teaches geeky younger bro the art of the heist, but when the ex con bro is killed in heist and geeky bro must find the courage to save the day?”

    Hmm, do I sense the makings of a logline? A seed of a plot?

    IMHO, a good logline triggers the imagination. Maybe not with same story ideas you have in mind. But it gets other minds cooking with ideas and curious to know what you’ve come up with.

    The above, more than any other variation you’ve posted to date, gets my mind cooking.

    I think you have the basic ingredients — now to figure out a winning recipe and bake the cake.

    So keep cooking the concept and if a recipe flops, well, one of my favorite writing quotes is from John Lasseter, executive producer of most of Pixars ‘flops’: “Be wrong as fast as you can.”

    Regards and best wishes.

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  3. Posted: April 25, 2013In: Public

    When a Mafia leader goes to jail, his impulsive shopaholic housewife must assume the role of mafia boss and finish his last deadly mission without jeopardize the rest of the family.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 26, 2013 at 4:43 am

    Well, the jeopardy is there, so why not? I don't know what your idea of the big job she has to finish for the family. But it wouldn't hurt if it has something to do with taking down his arch rival. And then the husband goes to jail(complication triggering greater jeopardy...) and now she has to do tRead more

    Well, the jeopardy is there, so why not?

    I don’t know what your idea of the big job she has to finish for the family. But it wouldn’t hurt if it has something to do with taking down his arch rival. And then the husband goes to jail(complication triggering greater jeopardy…) and now she has to do the job before the arch rival, sensing vulnerability and opportunity, closes in for the kill shot.

    Anyway, your premise generates all kinds of comedic choices. IMHO you’ve got a premise with an genuine hook.

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