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  1. Posted: April 24, 2013In: Public

    The Greek gods and goddesses from myth are very much real, callous, and they are all coming for an unsuspecting 16-year-old Alexandra Adler, whether she likes it or not.

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    Added an answer on April 24, 2013 at 8:16 am

    But what's Alex's objective goal? If the Greeks gods don't give a damn about us, why should we give a damn about them in this story?

    But what’s Alex’s objective goal? If the Greeks gods don’t give a damn about us, why should we give a damn about them in this story?

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  2. Posted: April 23, 2013In: Public

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    Added an answer on April 23, 2013 at 7:38 am

    "deadly game of cat and mouse" - good way of phrasing the chase.

    “deadly game of cat and mouse” – good way of phrasing the chase.

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  3. Posted: April 23, 2013In: Public

    Strife

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    Added an answer on April 23, 2013 at 2:50 am

    Hit the post comment button too soon... What I meant to say is that if the young thief is the protagonist, what is his objective goal in taking the suitcase? Also about: "The enforcer has sworn a solemn oath to kill himself if he fails..." Fails to do what? Fails to recover the suitcase? Fails to apRead more

    Hit the post comment button too soon…

    What I meant to say is that if the young thief is the protagonist, what is his objective goal in taking the suitcase?

    Also about: “The enforcer has sworn a solemn oath to kill himself if he fails…”

    Fails to do what? Fails to recover the suitcase? Fails to apprehend the thief?

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