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  1. Posted: April 17, 2013In: Public

    When troubled teen takes control of a crashed alien craft, he decides to fly it to London to prevent his girlfriend from cheating on him. With a secret government agency and a massing alien army in hot pursuit, he must choose between saving his relationship and saving the world.

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    Added an answer on April 19, 2013 at 9:01 am

    Correction: no-brainer.

    Correction: no-brainer.

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  2. Posted: April 17, 2013In: Public

    When troubled teen takes control of a crashed alien craft, he decides to fly it to London to prevent his girlfriend from cheating on him. With a secret government agency and a massing alien army in hot pursuit, he must choose between saving his relationship and saving the world.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 19, 2013 at 9:00 am

    "he must choose between saving his relationship and saving the world" It's always good to put the protagonist in the crossfire of a dilemma but as written his choice seems like a no-brainel. What's so special about a girl who's about to cheat on him that he has to think longer than a New York nanoseRead more

    “he must choose between saving his relationship and saving the world”

    It’s always good to put the protagonist in the crossfire of a dilemma but as written his choice seems like a no-brainel. What’s so special about a girl who’s about to cheat on him that he has to think longer than a New York nanosecond what to do? Save the world — dump the girl.

    IOW: it doesn’t seem to be a real dilemma. A real dilemma has two choices both equally desirable and/or necessary — but the character can only choose one at the price of forfeiting the other.

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  3. Posted: April 17, 2013

    A college photography student who discovers terrifying images of ghostly children in her shots of an abandoned amusement park races to uncover a decades-old mystery to save her son from the vengeful spirits.

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    Added an answer on April 19, 2013 at 8:46 am

    But, once again, what is the cause-and-effect link between her investigation and the risk to her son? Why does the former put the latter in jeopardy?

    But, once again, what is the cause-and-effect link between her investigation and the risk to her son? Why does the former put the latter in jeopardy?

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