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After discovering the last of his estranged Father’s inheritance is locked in a neighbors safe deposit box, Chris, a shy and awkward out of work accountant convinces his felon Brother to break into the bank where it’s locked. When his brother is shot during the Heist, he is faced with the choice to either play hostage, or to finish the job himself.
Problematical. It's too long. Enough said on that point. Another problem is that the protagonist is not cast in a sympathetic light. That he's estranged from his father doesn't tell us who is to blame. It doesn't specifically inform us that the accountant has been unfairly cut out of the inheritanceRead more
Problematical.
It’s too long. Enough said on that point.
Another problem is that the protagonist is not cast in a sympathetic light. That he’s estranged from his father doesn’t tell us who is to blame. It doesn’t specifically inform us that the accountant has been unfairly cut out of the inheritance.
IOW: his crime can be justified if he’s trying to get what should by rights be his. An audience will root for a criminal act for good cause — but will they root for a criminal act for no other reason than greed?
And what’s in it for the brother to take such risk and effort? Brotherly love? Or does he have his own motives? What’s his cut of his father’s inheritance?
See lessAfter finding her teenage son in bed with the town scamp, an overprotective mother hires a prostitute to pose as a student at her sons High School in an effort to lure him away from his budding new romance. But when the son falls for the alluring money hungry prostitute things quickly spiral out of control.
Yes, please reconsider 'overly protective'. If she doesn't think he's ready for a sexual relationship -- why does she hooks him up with a hooker? Of all people. Sorry, I can't get past the premise because it just doesn't compute.
Yes, please reconsider ‘overly protective’.
If she doesn’t think he’s ready for a sexual relationship — why does she hooks him up with a hooker? Of all people. Sorry, I can’t get past the premise because it just doesn’t compute.
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Huh? Why would an "overly protective" mother hire a prostitute for her son? What's she trying to "protect" him from?
Huh? Why would an “overly protective” mother hire a prostitute for her son? What’s she trying to “protect” him from?
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