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  1. Posted: March 21, 2013In: Public

    When his friend vanishes, a sleep deprived police informant must navigate his suburb's criminal underbelly to pick up the trail before he falls asleep.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 12, 2013 at 1:06 pm

    The objective goal shouldn't be to "navigate". It has to be to solve the mystery of the disappearance. But why must he do so before he falls asleep? What the consequences if he does falls asleep before completing his quest?

    The objective goal shouldn’t be to “navigate”. It has to be to solve the mystery of the disappearance. But why must he do so before he falls asleep? What the consequences if he does falls asleep before completing his quest?

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  2. Posted: March 21, 2013In: Public

    When a rogue cop is trying to keep his actions unnoticed, due to the killers that he cause.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 12, 2013 at 1:01 pm

    The logline doesn't make sense. And rogue cop stories are a dime a dozen. What distinguishes this rogue cop from all the other 1,000,001 rogue cops in all the other 1,000,001 cop movies ever made?

    The logline doesn’t make sense. And rogue cop stories are a dime a dozen. What distinguishes this rogue cop from all the other 1,000,001 rogue cops in all the other 1,000,001 cop movies ever made?

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  3. Posted: March 21, 2013In: 01

    Removed by poster. Plz remove

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    Added an answer on April 12, 2013 at 12:57 pm

    He has to find the scientist before the Allies do-- there's his competition. And he will pay very dearly in terms of his career, or even his life, if he fails in the mission. "Uncle Joe" (Stalin) will not be happy.

    He has to find the scientist before the Allies do– there’s his competition. And he will pay very dearly in terms of his career, or even his life, if he fails in the mission. “Uncle Joe” (Stalin) will not be happy.

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