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  1. Posted: August 6, 2019In: Student Loglines

    Is there any relationship between a story logline and script?

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    Added an answer on August 6, 2019 at 11:18 pm

    My analogy that the logline is the skeleton of the plot; the script is the skeleton fully fleshed out,? the arrangement of all the muscles and organs.-- characters, events, settings.

    My analogy that the logline is the skeleton of the plot; the script is the skeleton fully fleshed out,? the arrangement of all the muscles and organs.– characters, events, settings.

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2019In: Action

    When a rookie martial artist’s first covert target is to eliminate innocent children, she refuses to complete the mission and must fight the deadly forces tracking them down and find the truth of their identities.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 6, 2019 at 4:05 am

    Yqwertz is on the mark. A logline has to suspend disbelief.? A logline reader doesn't have to know how it all makes sense, but he has to be willing to go along with the "what if..?" premise.? But I, too, am unable to suspend disbelief that a villain would intentionally want to kill innocent childrenRead more

    Yqwertz is on the mark.

    A logline has to suspend disbelief.? A logline reader doesn’t have to know how it all makes sense, but he has to be willing to go along with the “what if..?” premise.? But I, too, am unable to suspend disbelief that a villain would intentionally want to kill innocent children.? Not without knowing for what motivates him (like he’s a rabid Hitlerian racist).? But no motivation is given.

    And if I knew the villain’s motivation, I don’t understand why he would recruit an unproven rookie to do a job that requires the services of? tried and tested, hard-hearted, vicious veteran.

    And as noted, the stated objective goal lacks closure, is off the mark.? Finding out who the bad guys are is only a step toward the objective goal, a means to her desired end.? Which is?

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2019In: Comedy

    It’s the year 2030 and Teller is working at becoming Supreme Leader with the help of his good friends and the absurd seems to be working.

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    Added an answer on August 6, 2019 at 3:43 am

    >>absurd wayMore absurd than how Trump got elected President in 2016?? Or? how Volodymyr Zelensky, a comedian, recently got elected President of Ukraine?? As they say, truth is stranger than fiction.You gotta write what you wanna write.? But your fictional future has been eclipsed by present rRead more

    >>absurd way

    More absurd than how Trump got elected President in 2016?? Or? how Volodymyr Zelensky, a comedian, recently got elected President of Ukraine?? As they say, truth is stranger than fiction.

    You gotta write what you wanna write.? But your fictional future has been eclipsed by present reality.? You premise will inevitably be compared to what is now playing out in real time before our eyes.? Your script has two hard acts to follow.? Just saying.

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