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When a young woman blissfully in love, climbs the Swiss Alps to meet her boyfriend, she is unexpectedly dumped and must overcome heartbreak to start again.
Excellent point by Richiev!? Often a logline explicitly or implicitly plants a "Chekhov gun".? ? It violates audience expectations not to "fire it" by the 3rd Act.? If climbing the Alps for whatever reason is a key event in the 1st Act, it seems to me it needs development or at least a reminder in tRead more
Excellent point by Richiev!? Often a logline explicitly or implicitly plants a “Chekhov gun”.? ? It violates audience expectations not to “fire it” by the 3rd Act.? If climbing the Alps for whatever reason is a key event in the 1st Act, it seems to me it needs development or at least a reminder in the 2nd Act, a payoff in the 3rd.
See lessA man? kidnaps and disguises himself as the person his wife plans to have an affair with from a popular online website that encourages?infidelity .
I like the idea but am somewhat confused.? "A man kidnaps".? Kidnaps whom? His wife I presume but it's not immediately clear from the logline. And everything in a logline should be immediately clear.Also, have you considered framing the story in term of two guys married to each other or two women??Read more
I like the idea but am somewhat confused.? “A man kidnaps”.? Kidnaps whom? His wife I presume but it’s not immediately clear from the logline. And everything in a logline should be immediately clear.
Also, have you considered framing the story in term of two guys married to each other or two women?? And one of them discovers that his or her partner is having an affair with someone of the alternate sex (they met online, of course).? And then…
That would certainly make the pretense, the disguise more credible.
Or double the complication:? A guy in a gay marriage secretly dates a? gal in a lesbian marriage.? When their partners find out, the betrayed partners unwittingly hookup for a date to expose the infidelity.? ?Or each betrayed partner hooks up with the betraying partner.
Anyway, the basic premise is overripe with comedic possibilities. Good luck with the project!
See lessWhen a brain implant in his wife goes bad, a guru neurosurgeon must find a way to neutralise the implant; but when he discovers the problem is deliberate, not a glitch, he must find and destory the person tampering his wife’s mind before his wife kills herself, his daughter and others.
A "Doh!" moment. Thanks to Richiev and Paul Clarke for catching my goof.Still, I believe the nature and purpose of the implant needs to be clarified.? What's was it supposed to do versus what does it turn out to do?? Specifically what does "go bad" mean?
A “Doh!” moment. Thanks to Richiev and Paul Clarke for catching my goof.
Still, I believe the nature and purpose of the implant needs to be clarified.? What’s was it supposed to do versus what does it turn out to do?? Specifically what does “go bad” mean?
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