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  1. Posted: July 29, 2019In: Romance

    When a young woman blissfully in love, climbs the Swiss Alps to meet her boyfriend, she is unexpectedly dumped and must overcome heartbreak to start again.

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    Added an answer on July 29, 2019 at 11:50 pm

    An interesting setup. But, "overcome heartbreak" refers to her subjective need, not her objective want. And loglines are about the latter, not the former. And "start again" is vague.? Start what again?? Mountain climbing or...?? As a result of being dumped, what becomes her objective goal?? What wilRead more

    An interesting setup. But, “overcome heartbreak” refers to her subjective need, not her objective want. And loglines are about the latter, not the former. And “start again” is vague.? Start what again?? Mountain climbing or…?? As a result of being dumped, what becomes her objective goal?? What will make it difficult for her to achieve it?

    Also there is an ongoing refurbishing of the romantic genre.? Stories about women who define themselves, their happiness in terms of men are being deprecated in favor of stories about women who define themselves in terms of their accomplishments, whose definition of happiness is not solely about getting the guy. The woman’s job is no longer to please the man; rather the man’s job is to respect the women and get with the program of? supporting co-equal relationships.? She is as likely to dump him as he would dump her.

    Bottom line: if she climbs the mountain for his sake in Act 1, she would climb it for herself in Act 3.? (Or something equivalent.)? That could constitute her character arc.

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  2. Posted: July 29, 2019In: SciFi

    A bible schoolteacher is being beat to death by two cops, if he doesn’t fight back, he will be killed.

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    Added an answer on July 29, 2019 at 10:51 pm

    As yqwerz said.? It describes a scene, but not a plot to flesh out a 90 minute movie.? And? why is the genre SciFi?And on the upside, if he dies,? because he's a believer,? he gets to take the fast lane to heaven, right?? So what's the problem?? What's to worry about?? It's a happy ending for him..Read more

    As yqwerz said.? It describes a scene, but not a plot to flesh out a 90 minute movie.? And? why is the genre SciFi?

    And on the upside, if he dies,? because he’s a believer,? he gets to take the fast lane to heaven, right?? So what’s the problem?? What’s to worry about?? It’s a happy ending for him.. :-]

    So what’s going on?? What’s the story, the plot? What becomes his objective goal after he survives the attack?? Who/what opposes him?? In the long run of the film, what’s at stake?

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  3. Posted: July 29, 2019In: Drama

    When his only friend goes missing under mysterious circumstances, a psychotically depressed teenager decides to become a superhero in order to find him.

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    Added an answer on July 29, 2019 at 6:44 am

    What and how? What? unique ability or latent power does he have?? A power that differentiates him from all the other superheroes the litter the cinema landscape?? And how does he acquire and develop it?

    What and how?

    What? unique ability or latent power does he have?? A power that differentiates him from all the other superheroes the litter the cinema landscape?? And how does he acquire and develop it?

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