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When a young Australian Muslim girl loses her mother, her grief turns to an obsession with building robots, where she fights for the chance to win an International Robotics Championship and realise a dream her mother never could.
An interesting character and situation.Would it be accurate to say that the story hook could be written as:An Australian Muslim teenager overcomes prejudice and her lack of a formal education to compete in an International Robotics Championship.???
An interesting character and situation.
Would it be accurate to say that the story hook could be written as:
An Australian Muslim teenager overcomes prejudice and her lack of a formal education to compete in an International Robotics Championship.
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See lessIn a remote Helmand village, a Special Forces team struggles against the Taliban and faces skeptical locals as they try to secure ground and transfer power to the Afghans.
As Richiev indicated, its usually better to write the logline in terms of an alpha character who leads the effort.? Or from a POV (Point of View) character, Like Charlie Sheen's character, Chris, in "Platoon". The objective goal is rather vague.? When does this take place?? It's rather unrealistic,Read more
As Richiev indicated, its usually better to write the logline in terms of an alpha character who leads the effort.? Or from a POV (Point of View) character, Like Charlie Sheen’s character, Chris, in “Platoon”.
The objective goal is rather vague.? When does this take place?? It’s rather unrealistic, unbelievable after 19 years of a war with no end in sight, no light at the end of the tunnel, that any one fighting in Afghanistan would be under any illusion about winning the war, fixing the country.
And is this based upon personal combat experience?
See lessWhen a Bible Schoolteacher is brutalized by two racist cops, he must kill or be killed.
As mikepedley 85 said. How can he have superhero powers when he couldn't even defend himself?? What is the source of his power? And kill who? Reads like the origin story for an anti-superhero. I dunno.
As mikepedley 85 said.
How can he have superhero powers when he couldn’t even defend himself?? What is the source of his power?
And kill who?
Reads like the origin story for an anti-superhero.
I dunno.
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