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To win the affections of the dean’s daughter, a bad boy rich kid has until graduation to get accepted into a snooty club, in order to prove his worth.
>>>There’s nothing stopping the couple from being progressive. >>> they could easily run away or shun the father. There's nothing in the logline to signal to logline readers that they are a progressive couple. Or that she has the gumption to defy the wishes of her old man. LoglinesRead more
>>>There’s nothing stopping the couple from being progressive.
>>> they could easily run away or shun the father.
There’s nothing in the logline to signal to logline readers that they are a progressive couple. Or that she has the gumption to defy the wishes of her old man.
Loglines have one and only one chance, 10-15 seconds, to make the right impression.
See lessTo win the affections of the dean’s daughter, a bad boy rich kid has until graduation to get accepted into a snooty club, in order to prove his worth.
Teens and young adults are the obvious target audience for the film. What's the emotional hook for them, the social relevancy to the way they date and marry (or not) these days? The concept seems retro, so last century (like before the 60's -- 2 generations ago), so unlike, so unrelatable to the wayRead more
Teens and young adults are the obvious target audience for the film. What’s the emotional hook for them, the social relevancy to the way they date and marry (or not) these days? The concept seems retro, so last century (like before the 60’s — 2 generations ago), so unlike, so unrelatable to the way young people date these days.
And as Mike Pedley alluded to, in the era of #MetToo, what is appealing to women (half of the potential audience) about a female character who is so passive/submissive that she can’t marry a guy unless her daddy gives the green light?
Sorry, I just don’t see what makes the story marketable to a contemporary young adult audience.
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Very good note by Mike Pedley, a useful way of framing the relationship between the inciting incident and objective goal.
Very good note by Mike Pedley, a useful way of framing the relationship between the inciting incident and objective goal.
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