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  1. Posted: August 19, 2020In: SciFi

    When his father, gunned down by terrorists, dies on her operating table, an atheist cryogenecist and an orphaned catholic doctor partake in a near death expermiment searching for proof of an afterlife.

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    Replied to answer on August 19, 2020 at 7:16 am

    P.S. Also the story is tagged as "historical". That means it's about an actual historical event, actual people, real places. What makes this story "historical"? Or should it be tagged as another genre?

    P.S. Also the story is tagged as “historical”. That means it’s about an actual historical event, actual people, real places. What makes this story “historical”? Or should it be tagged as another genre?

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  2. Posted: August 19, 2020In: SciFi

    When his father, gunned down by terrorists, dies on her operating table, an atheist cryogenecist and an orphaned catholic doctor partake in a near death expermiment searching for proof of an afterlife.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2020 at 7:13 am

    Truth about what? Be specific. Loglines are about the pursuit of a specific objective goal. A specific objective goal is a person, object, or event that can be visualized on screen. What's the visual for "truth"? What does "truth" look like?

    Truth about what? Be specific. Loglines are about the pursuit of a specific objective goal. A specific objective goal is a person, object, or event that can be visualized on screen.

    What’s the visual for “truth”? What does “truth” look like?

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  3. Posted: August 16, 2020In: Drama

    As their lives begin to fall apart, an alcoholic bar supply salesman helps his best friend, an MMA fighter, chase his childhood dream to play music at a storied Austin, Texas venue.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2020 at 7:07 am

    Agree with Richiev. If the salesman is the main character, what's in it for him? What does he stand to gain if his friend succeeds? What does he stand to lose if he fails? IOW: what personal dream comes true for him if his friend's personal dream comes true?

    Agree with Richiev.

    If the salesman is the main character, what’s in it for him? What does he stand to gain if his friend succeeds? What does he stand to lose if he fails? IOW: what personal dream comes true for him if his friend’s personal dream comes true?

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