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When her boyfriend’ doctors are unable to treat his fatal illness, an unsophisticated Papuan girl in service to his father must convince him to abandon his traditional medical views and travel to Papua to allow her and her Medicine man grandfather to save is life.
The logline is tagged as a coming of age story. How so? Coming of age for whom? The boy? The girl? Both? Who is in the driver's seat of the plot? Who is the pov character?
The logline is tagged as a coming of age story. How so?
Coming of age for whom? The boy? The girl? Both?
Who is in the driver’s seat of the plot? Who is the pov character?
See lessAfter a programming error a troubled AI developer is trapped in a lab as they struggle to teach their flawed AI the value of human life, and find their own humanity, so the AI does not destroy the world they intended for it to save.
P.S. Also, save the world from what? The world needs a lot of saving from a lot of problems. A logline should be a rifle, not a shotgun. That is, it should fire one bullet (singularity and unity of action) aimed at the bulls eye of a specific target (one well-defined, specific objective goal). It shRead more
P.S. Also, save the world from what? The world needs a lot of saving from a lot of problems.
A logline should be a rifle, not a shotgun. That is, it should fire one bullet (singularity and unity of action) aimed at the bulls eye of a specific target (one well-defined, specific objective goal). It should not be a shotgun blasting widely scattered buckshot in the general direction of some unstated target.
In the story world of this logline, what does humanity need to be saved from?
See lessAfter a programming error a troubled AI developer is trapped in a lab as they struggle to teach their flawed AI the value of human life, and find their own humanity, so the AI does not destroy the world they intended for it to save.
While I am well aware of the trend toward gender neutral pronouns, loglines should indicate the gender of the protagonist because casting a movie is not a gender neutral exercise.
While I am well aware of the trend toward gender neutral pronouns, loglines should indicate the gender of the protagonist because casting a movie is not a gender neutral exercise.
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