1. Posted: August 12, 2020In:

    When a young man discovers a magic sword that gives him the power to see the curse that he has due to his sins and that will guide him to the lost city where he will be healed, he will have to deal with the supreme leader of his former city as well as the guilt of past actions.

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    Film is a visual medium Every element in a logline must refer to a person, place, event, or thing, that can be visualized on the screen. What is the visual for guilt ? What does it look like? Loglines are not about internal conflicts or subjective issues. Loglines are about external conflicts in theRead more

    Film is a visual medium Every element in a logline must refer to a person, place, event, or thing, that can be visualized on the screen. What is the visual for guilt ? What does it look like?

    Loglines are not about internal conflicts or subjective issues. Loglines are about external conflicts in the struggle to obtain objective goals.

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  2. Posted: August 12, 2020In:

    When a snake attack threatens his species with extinction, a sheltered kangaroo rat must embark on a perilous journey to unite his colony with another, 250 kilometers away.

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    Agree with Mike Pedley. And how would a kangaroo rat know there is a "cousin" colony 250 k-i-l-o-m-e-t-e-r-s away?

    Agree with Mike Pedley.

    And how would a kangaroo rat know there is a “cousin” colony 250 k-i-l-o-m-e-t-e-r-s away?

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  3. Posted: August 12, 2020In:

    A young LAPD officer seeks the truth about her parent’s murder and to quiet horrific flashbacks from her childhood, but the search puts her in the sights of a serial killer.

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    I suggest the logline should more clearly establish a causal connection between her parent's murder and her career as a cop; that is, the murder was her prime motivation for becoming a cop. And then...

    I suggest the logline should more clearly establish a causal connection between her parent’s murder and her career as a cop; that is, the murder was her prime motivation for becoming a cop.

    And then…

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