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When a close-knit farming village in the Lake District is devastated by foot and mouth disease, it falls to one woman and a mysterious Indian newcomer to save her family and restore hope to the community. Based on a true story.
Based upon your statement? "she is responsible for bringing the Indian to the village", I suggest that? "joins forces with an Indian artist" needs to be reworded to be more forceful, needs to clearly convey that as the protagonist, she is proactive.? ?Is it accurate to say she "recruits" him?>Read more
Based upon your statement? “she is responsible for bringing the Indian to the village”, I suggest that? “joins forces with an Indian artist” needs to be reworded to be more forceful, needs to clearly convey that as the protagonist, she is proactive.? ?Is it accurate to say she “recruits” him?
>>> beloved dairy cows
I grew up in a rural community, worked on dairy farms, went on cattle drives. So I understand the bonds that dairymen and cattlemen develop for their livestock even though their animals are destined later or sooner for the slaughterhouse. (I got emotionally involved with the swine — what can I say? I felt sorry and outraged that such an intelligent animal was forced to live confined in its own filth.)
Anyway,? what I mean to to say is that I’m not sure city slickers will appreciate that dimension of the story from reading the logline.? ?And maybe it doesn’t matter.
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Which manifests as a physical symptom — he? can’t rise to the occasion..? So just say he can’t have sex or that he’s impotent.? Tell it like it is.
>>>has come close
But not close enough!
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