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A future Test-Pilot stranded at the fare side of the Galaxy trying to find a way home while solving the mystery of a black planet.
As variable said, a logline (and script) must be built on the spine of one primary action toward achieving one overarching objective goal.? All other actions are vertebrae to achieving that one goal.And what is there about the black hole that makes it a mystery that MUST be solved?? Or else what?? WRead more
As variable said, a logline (and script) must be built on the spine of one primary action toward achieving one overarching objective goal.? All other actions are vertebrae to achieving that one goal.
And what is there about the black hole that makes it a mystery that MUST be solved?? Or else what?? What’s at stake if he doesn’t solve the mystery??
See lessIn 1961, a British double agent is blackmailed with his past crimes by a former colleague, and forced to spy on a suspected Nazi war criminal, now an American jet-setter living on the French Riviera.
Variable raises good questions.? Why does his colleague resort to blackmail when the more efficient tactic would be to tip off the Israeli Mossad which? was the most relentless and competent? group of spooks for tracking down and bringing to justice Nazi war criminals. Something his colleague, a proRead more
Variable raises good questions.? Why does his colleague resort to blackmail when the more efficient tactic would be to tip off the Israeli Mossad which? was the most relentless and competent? group of spooks for tracking down and bringing to justice Nazi war criminals. Something his colleague, a professional spy, should know.
That aside, the logline suggests a complex story where the protagonist has to resolve two plot problems — the goal to be realized in the future of nabbing the ex-Nazi and the goal of resolving the ghost in his past that makes him vulnerable to blackmail.? Ideally, there would be a complementary relationship between the two such that the climax resolves both.
See lessA former sex addict, unable to have sex with the woman he loves, returns to his old psychiatrist, a twisted and manipulative woman, and the only person who might be able to cure him.
Even though it's a comedy,? I find it? hard to buy into the premise that a twisted and manipulative shrink could enable him to rise to the occasion again with the woman he loves.? Unless, he has a masochism fetish and her form of therapy is bondage-domination-sadism.? In which case, I suggest that'sRead more
Even though it’s a comedy,? I find it? hard to buy into the premise that a twisted and manipulative shrink could enable him to rise to the occasion again with the woman he loves.? Unless, he has a masochism fetish and her form of therapy is bondage-domination-sadism.? In which case, I suggest that’s how to describe them.
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