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The chance to bring to light a stealth Claimant to the Camelot Mantle is the media equivalent of the Holy Grail. Here is a tale of a woman raised in obscurity , in ignorance of her true origins. Living for years in the distant Provinces who has suddenly discovered her roots. More interesting, the Secret had been kept from her for over 50 years. Where the dark heart of conspiracy takes on a whole new meaning. This is the Zodiac speaking.
LIke Richiev I have no idea what the story is about.? And I am familiar with the case of the Bay Area Zodiac killer.Of course, a logline? shouldn't describe the plot in detail and should never give away a Big Reveal or the ending. But it must succinctly answer 3 basic question as explained in? "OurRead more
LIke Richiev I have no idea what the story is about.? And I am familiar with the case of the Bay Area Zodiac killer.
Of course, a logline? shouldn’t describe the plot in detail and should never give away a Big Reveal or the ending. But it must succinctly answer 3 basic question as explained in? “Our Formula”:
See less1]What is the inciting incident that sets the plot in motion?
2] Who is the protagonist and? what is her role?
3} What is the protagonist’s specific objective goal? What is she struggling to achieve or acquire?
In 1977, a reformed ex-con must return to New York City?s violent underworld in order to save his childhood best friend from a dangerous gangster.
The new version seems to reverse roles. Now it's the drug dealer who comes off as the protagonist.? Yet more words are spent describing his best friend.? Who is the protagonist?? Who owns the plot? And how will making $10,000 in one week save him from the mob boss?? Is he in debt to the boss, has toRead more
The new version seems to reverse roles. Now it’s the drug dealer who comes off as the protagonist.? Yet more words are spent describing his best friend.? Who is the protagonist?? Who owns the plot?
And how will making $10,000 in one week save him from the mob boss?? Is he in debt to the boss, has to pay him back?? The dramatic link between cause (the threat) and effect (make $10,000) needs clarification.
See lessUpon realising he has a super-fan, the emotionally volatile singer of a struggling band initially feels flattered; but he allows this feeling to darken into something obsessive and unhealthy as he and the fan begin an illicit dance of mutual shadowing, pursuing each other without ever actually meeting. So when the fan’s interest begins to wane, her happiness and the wellbeing of those around her is threatened by his unwillingness to give up her adoration.
I think Richiev is on the right tack, but this being the age of the internet:When her fansite for her favorite band goes viral, an obsessive teen finds herself being stalked by the emotionally unstable lead singer.(22 words)This is predicated on the assumption that? the story entails a? pas de deuxRead more
I think Richiev is on the right tack, but this being the age of the internet:
When her fansite for her favorite band goes viral, an obsessive teen finds herself being stalked by the emotionally unstable lead singer.
(22 words)
This is predicated on the assumption that? the story entails a? pas de deux of two quasi-OCD people? She starts out as obsessed with the band as he becomes with her.
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