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After living with the lie for 30 years that she heroically assassinated a notorious Nazi war criminal, a new clue gives a retired Mossad agent one last chance to finish the job she botched.
This is a logline for marketing the script.A logline for developing the script is another matter because the story jumps back and forth between the present and? the past. (For more on the distinction between the two, see? Development vs. Marketing under the discussion of the basic formula.)And the BRead more
This is a logline for marketing the script.
A logline for developing the script is another matter because the story jumps back and forth between the present and? the past. (For more on the distinction between the two, see? Development vs. Marketing under the discussion of the basic formula.)
And the Big Reveal, that she failed in her mission, was responsible for the Nazi? escaping , doesn’t come until deep into the 2nd Act.? Normally, a logline? shouldn’t disclose a Big Reveal, particularly one that occurs so late in the story.? But the Big Reveal — that she botched the job, hence, that she’s been living a lie for 30 years — is the story hook.? And IMHO, when it comes to marketing a script. the story hook is the most? important element; it trumps all the usual “rules”.
Further, there are complications and a Big Twist in the 3rd Act that keep the plot riding the up escalator in terms of tension and suspense.
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See lessA rich, successful doctor with a debilitating sex addiction becomes entangled in kinky and increasingly dangerous power games with his sexy psychiatrist.
>>>with a debilitating sex addiction becomes entangled in kinky and increasingly dangerous power gamesThat's a complication to the plot.? A complication created by the relationship.? But what is the doctor's original objective goal that led him to get entangled with the shrink? Or his objecRead more
>>>with a debilitating sex addiction becomes entangled in kinky and increasingly dangerous power games
That’s a complication to the plot.? A complication created by the relationship.? But what is the doctor’s original objective goal that led him to get entangled with the shrink? Or his objective goal in spite of the dangerous entanglement?? Or his objective goal? triggered by the relationship?
And what are the power games really about?? BDSM?? If so, say so because it’s a selling point.
See lessWhen a struggling video game designer begins seeing his characters in real life, he suspects he?s already playing a game of his own creation and begins searching for patterns to help complete and escape the game.
Knightrider:I think the premise has a lot of potential.? Like Linux distributions,? it's robust enough to fork in numerous directions. (It certainly forks in numerous directions in my mind. ) However,? I don't? (yet) get? the sense that you have settled on one fork, one plot path.
Knightrider:
I think the premise has a lot of potential.? Like Linux distributions,? it’s robust enough to fork in numerous directions. (It certainly forks in numerous directions in my mind. ) However,? I don’t? (yet) get? the sense that you have settled on one fork, one plot path.
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