1. Posted: November 16, 2018In:

    Living in poverty, a neglected boy discovers the power of his imagination through reading but struggles to escape the harsh realities of his abuse.

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    dpg Singularity

    >>>power of his imagination Power to do what? >>>struggles to escape How?? What is his objective goal that will enable him to escape his harsh reality? The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn't follow through with a complete plot.? ?We don't really know, have a cleRead more

    >>>power of his imagination
    Power to do what?

    >>>struggles to escape
    How?? What is his objective goal that will enable him to escape his harsh reality?

    The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn’t follow through with a complete plot.? ?We don’t really know, have a clear idea as to what the main action of the story is.

    Follow the link for? “Our Formula” at the top of the web page for the basic building blocks of an industry standard logline.

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  2. Posted: November 15, 2018In:

    After waking up in cells with only a 12-hour countdown and a row of switches on the wall, two individuals must figure out how to work together in isolation in order to escape.

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    >>>in cellsIn separate cells, I presume.But why? Do they know why they have been imprisoned, why they will be killed if they don't solve the puzzle?? And why would whoever has imprisoned not kill them off anyway if they succeed?? What's the villain's purpose in subjecting them to this ordeaRead more

    >>>in cells

    In separate cells, I presume.

    But why? Do they know why they have been imprisoned, why they will be killed if they don’t solve the puzzle?? And why would whoever has imprisoned not kill them off anyway if they succeed?? What’s the villain’s purpose in subjecting them to this ordeal?

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  3. Posted: November 15, 2018In:

    Several years after losing his team in a mission gone wrong, a top grade elite sniper is recruited back to train a team of rising soldiers to stop a group of elite forces trying to kill a foreign politician.

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    So... the mission to take out Osama bin Laden gets a team of seasoned Navy Seals,? the cr?me de la cr?me de la? cr?me of? fighting forces.? But the mission to protect the President only rates a crew of unseasoned "rising soldiers" led by? a man? whose career has been tarnished by a failed mission. IRead more

    So… the mission to take out Osama bin Laden gets a team of seasoned Navy Seals,? the cr?me de la cr?me de la? cr?me of? fighting forces.? But the mission to protect the President only rates a crew of unseasoned “rising soldiers” led by? a man? whose career has been tarnished by a failed mission.

    I don’t think so.

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