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In an Anthromorphic world, a diverse team of athletes competes in the futuristic sports called Hypersports in which species compete against each other for the title of king of beast. However our team, are the first ever-diverse team, believing it would make them a stronger force. This however is underpinned with internal cultural differences leading to internal conflict and external conflict. They need learn to put away their differences in order to stand up for there believes and win the title.
>>> could be about 85 words.???FWIW: I?ve never read a logline longer than 40 words. And I?ve studied over a 1,000.? A long logline defeats the whole purpose of a logline, which is to succinctly state what the script is about to busy, multi-tasking movie makers suffering from industry inducRead more
>>> could be about 85 words.
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See lessFWIW: I?ve never read a logline longer than 40 words. And I?ve studied over a 1,000.? A long logline defeats the whole purpose of a logline, which is to succinctly state what the script is about to busy, multi-tasking movie makers suffering from industry induced ADD, attention deficit disorder.? Their attention span is measured in seconds, not minutes.
TRIANGLE DANGEREUX — After a French female painter uses a time portal to successfully sell her cubist self portret at the Salon des Refus?s,1886, she convinces a rejected Van Gogh she’ll be his muze if he kills her made rich – double crossing – artdealing twin sister.
>>>I need an antag DPGWhy?? IMHO:? ?Your proposed story line won't sell.? The story hook to focus on is the relationship.A far more compelling story would be that of a woman, obsessed with the painter and his paintings, who goes back in time to stop him from committing suicide.? ?So he canRead more
>>>I need an antag DPG
Why?? IMHO:? ?Your proposed story line won’t sell.? The story hook to focus on is the relationship.
A far more compelling story would be that of a woman, obsessed with the painter and his paintings, who goes back in time to stop him from committing suicide.? ?So he can live on to enjoy the recognition and material success he was on the cusp of having as well as paint more masterpieces.
My 2.5 cents worth.
See lessIn an Anthromorphic world, a diverse team of athletes competes in the futuristic sports called Hypersports in which species compete against each other for the title of king of beast. However our team, are the first ever-diverse team, believing it would make them a stronger force. This however is underpinned with internal cultural differences leading to internal conflict and external conflict. They need learn to put away their differences in order to stand up for there believes and win the title.
At 81 words, this is way too long to be a logline.? It's more like a? story pitch. Please study the guidelines under "Our formula" at the top of the page for guidelines on writing an industry acceptable logline.
At 81 words, this is way too long to be a logline.? It’s more like a? story pitch.
Please study the guidelines under “Our formula” at the top of the page for guidelines on writing an industry acceptable logline.
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