1. Posted: October 23, 2018In:

    After an experiment-gone-wrong leaves a scientist broken and hurt, the scientist looks for a new place and a new life where he can belong.

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    We need to know how how the experiment went so wrong and how exactly it leaves him "broken and hurt" such that he MUST look for a new place to to live and belong. Why can't he just start over where he is?And what makes it a sci-fi? genre story?

    We need to know how how the experiment went so wrong and how exactly it leaves him “broken and hurt” such that he MUST look for a new place to to live and belong. Why can’t he just start over where he is?

    And what makes it a sci-fi? genre story?

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  2. Posted: October 23, 2018In:

    A young boy with autism goes to Sicily on vacation and falls in love with a girl.

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    And then what? What's the plot that arises out of the romance?

    And then what?

    What’s the plot that arises out of the romance?

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  3. Posted: October 20, 2018In:

    When several unexplained deaths occur in a retirement village, a cranky veteran suspects the widows and must uncover the truth before becoming the next to go.

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    I like the idea? of romancing the suspects, but suggest focusing on a plot involving romancing the prime suspect..? Focus on one woman and the relationship that develops in spite of his suspicions. So something like: After several mysterious deaths in a retirement community, a retired detective romaRead more

    I like the idea? of romancing the suspects, but suggest focusing on a plot involving romancing the prime suspect..? Focus on one woman and the relationship that develops in spite of his suspicions.

    So something like:

    After several mysterious deaths in a retirement community, a retired detective romances the prime suspect to solve the case.

    The plot twist/complication is he falls in love with her.? What should he trust, his heart or his head?

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