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When a Major disappears after an skirmishes with enemy forces, a search and rescue is undertaken as a Rookie slowly uncovers the existence of a greater, more primal threat that evolves into a series of horrific encounters beyond their capabilities.
The logline sets up a situation, but now it needs to follow through with? the missing ingredient for a plot:? what happens after the discovery?? What becomes the objective goal?? What is the action that arises from the encounter?
The logline sets up a situation, but now it needs to follow through with? the missing ingredient for a plot:? what happens after the discovery?? What becomes the objective goal?? What is the action that arises from the encounter?
See lessWhen her older husband dies of viagra overdose, leaving her cuffed on the bed frame, a sexually frustrated woman must break free or die alone in their isolated lake house.
In a secluded cabin, a woman must find a way to free herself when her husband dies after handcuffing her to the bed for some kinky sex. (27 words) And then comes the story twists and reveals, psychological garbage and a mysterious character.? But it's not possible to cram all that into a logline.? NRead more
In a secluded cabin, a woman must find a way to free herself when her husband dies after handcuffing her to the bed for some kinky sex.
(27 words)
And then comes the story twists and reveals, psychological garbage and a mysterious character.? But it’s not possible to cram all that into a logline.? Nor do I think? it necessary.? Job? #1 of a logline is? to get someone to read the script to find out what happens next.? ?I think the story hook? has plenty enough bait? in terms of the initial and primary dramatic problem to get that job done.
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See lessA top cop receives a rookie partner to help him to down a drug cartel after losing his old partner to the same cartel.
Please clarify:? ?who has been reckless, the "new? partner" or the "top cop"?? Ditto for who has to be kept from "turning in his badge".Also, if the top cop has been assigned a new partner as punishment for being "reckless", well, you can take certain liberties with comedy, but that may be a libertyRead more
Please clarify:? ?who has been reckless, the “new? partner” or the “top cop”?? Ditto for who has to be kept from “turning in his badge”.
Also, if the top cop has been assigned a new partner as punishment for being “reckless”, well, you can take certain liberties with comedy, but that may be a liberty too far. Nor is it necessary.? Just have the protagonist assigned a rookie partner to the DEU (drug enforcement unit)? whom he has to train.
Further, getting a new partner seems to be a complication rather than an inciting incident.? There is no apparent cause and effect relationship between getting a new partner and taking on a drug cartel.
So what is the inciting incident?? Why is the cop taking on a drug cartel?
Also, in the crime genre, the protagonist is defined? in relation to his nemesis.? But we have no idea what makes the nemesis so special, a worthy adversary.? For that matter, we have no idea what makes the protagonist so special? either; “top” is vague, general,
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