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When a radioactive spider’s bite grants him superpowers, a bullied teenager must use them to fight a rising super-villain.
Based on the popular Marvel Comics' superhero.Seven words. What else needs to be said?? The success of the comic books pre-sold the character and the movie franchise. No logline is really necessary.In the plot line for the 1st movie (2002),? the protagonist, Peter Parker, gets no respect nor love.?Read more
Based on the popular Marvel Comics’ superhero.
Seven words. What else needs to be said?? The success of the comic books pre-sold the character and the movie franchise. No logline is really necessary.
In the plot line for the 1st movie (2002),? the protagonist, Peter Parker, gets no respect nor love.? Until? a spider bite inoculates him with super powers.
And then his objective goal becomes to fight the forces of evil.
As if!
His?original objective goal is to use his new powers to win the prize money in a wrestling match to buy a car to woo the girl he loves.
Only after his beloved uncle dies in an accident he realizes he could have prevented, does the protagonist, driven by guilt and remorse, start to use his powers for good,? Love will have to wait.
And not until nearly half way? through the film does his story line (finally!) intersect with the story line of his designated nemesis, the Green Hornet. The battle between personified good and personified evil is joined.
See lessWhen a horde of zombies kill the sheriff of a sleepy frontier town, a penitent gunslinger, sentenced to hang, leads the townsfolk in their desperate fight for survival.
>>>incapacitates the sheriff Only incapacitated?? Seems? weak to me. How about something like: Saved at his hanging by a zombie invasion, a gunslinger stays and fights for the people who want him dead rather than flee town for his life and freedom. >>Saved at his hanging Open with himRead more
>>>incapacitates the sheriff
Only incapacitated?? Seems? weak to me.
How about something like:
Saved at his hanging by a zombie invasion, a gunslinger stays and fights for the people who want him dead rather than flee town for his life and freedom.
>>Saved at his hanging
Open with him being marched from the jail to the scaffold where he’s about to be hung, jeered on by a mob of townspeople.? As the noose being put around his neck — the zombies attack.
>>>a gunslinger stays and fights
Give him a clear cut opportunity to flee town in the ensuing chaos, save his live.? Then, for whatever reason, a reversal: he opts to stay and fight for the lives of the very people who want to see him hanged.? This implies a morally redeeming beat– but there’s no need to be explicit because that’s the subjective storyline and loglines are about the objective storyline.
fwiw
See lessWhen two siblings piece together the truth behind the ?Here be dragons? symbols on medieval maps, and learn of the possible existence of the last remaining dragon, powerful opposing forces converge in a see-sawing battle of wits, steel, meerkats, and witty repartee.
The logline sets up an interesting situation and discovery; now it needs to follow through and provide a? (brief) description of what becomes their objective goal.? What is the dramatic question raised by the discovery that the rest of the story will (eventually) answer?>>>powerful opposingRead more
The logline sets up an interesting situation and discovery; now it needs to follow through and provide a? (brief) description of what becomes their objective goal.? What is the dramatic question raised by the discovery that the rest of the story will (eventually) answer?
>>>powerful opposing forces converge in a see-sawing battle
?What will the winner of the battle achieve? -What is (the McGuffin?) everyone is fighting for?? What’s at stake?
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