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  1. Posted: October 5, 2018In: Western

    When a horde of zombies kill the sheriff of a sleepy frontier town, a penitent gunslinger, sentenced to hang, leads the townsfolk in their desperate fight for survival.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 6, 2018 at 4:31 am

    Mikepedley85.Thanks for the clarification.? My assumption was based upon my understanding of version 1.0.In the discussion thread for version 1.0, you said that your "over-arching theme [has] to do with the costs of mankind?s mindless destruction for the sake of progress."? ?That is a theme well worRead more

    Mikepedley85.

    Thanks for the clarification.? My assumption was based upon my understanding of version 1.0.

    In the discussion thread for version 1.0, you said that your “over-arching theme [has] to do with the costs of mankind?s mindless destruction for the sake of progress.”? ?That is a theme well worth exploring.

    But I don’t see how the moral geometry of your proposed plot lines up.? How does the protagonist gain redemption by fighting for the people who have engaged in mindless destruction, fighting against?the people who have been resurrected to avenge the destruction or who are agents of the people (Native Americans) who have been the victims of the mindless destruction??

    Or to phrase it another way:? If you? are deploying zombies in service of your theme, on what side of the thematic argument are they?

    Regards

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  2. Posted: October 5, 2018In: Western

    When a horde of zombies kill the sheriff of a sleepy frontier town, a penitent gunslinger, sentenced to hang, leads the townsfolk in their desperate fight for survival.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 5, 2018 at 9:36 pm

    If it's a Native American curse, then I presume the dead who are raised are also Native Americans.? Which, once again, casts the Native Americans in the stereotypical role of the bad guys, and the invading Europeans in the role of the good guys.I say this as someone who was born? in the American WesRead more

    If it’s a Native American curse, then I presume the dead who are raised are also Native Americans.? Which, once again, casts the Native Americans in the stereotypical role of the bad guys, and the invading Europeans in the role of the good guys.

    I say this as someone who was born? in the American West,? whose forefathers squatted on and stole land from Native Americans, who plundered and exploited the natural resources (water, timber, gold, silver) without any thought of Native American rights:? that configuration of good guys vs. bad guys just doesn’t play anymore? in? American movies.? The? zeitgeist? has evolved; the cultural mythos for the Old West has changed.

    IMHO, the gunfighter is seeking redemption? by fighting for the wrong side.

    My 2.5 cents worth.

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  3. Posted: October 4, 2018In: Action

    Set in the near future: When his neighbourhood is raided by a violent vigilante squad, a gang-member must venture through enemy territory to get his 5 year old daughter to sanctuary before they are killed.

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    Added an answer on October 5, 2018 at 9:15 pm

    If the protagonist is an ex-gang banger, he may be the victim of a vigilante squad inflicting street justice, but wouldn't it be justice that the gang banger has brought upon himself and his daughter for participating in lawless acts?? His daughter is innocent, but he isn't.?I find the moral geometrRead more

    If the protagonist is an ex-gang banger, he may be the victim of a vigilante squad inflicting street justice, but wouldn’t it be justice that the gang banger has brought upon himself and his daughter for participating in lawless acts?? His daughter is innocent, but he isn’t.?

    I find the moral geometry of the premise somewhat confusing and unsatisfactory.

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