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  1. Posted: September 18, 2018In: Noir

    A man makes numerous phone calls trying to negotiate his own safety while travelling to his gangster boss to confess his failure, finally having to settle for saving his family from revenge.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 19, 2018 at 2:23 pm

    Would benefit from a ticking clock.? He has X hours to do whatever.

    Would benefit from a ticking clock.? He has X hours to do whatever.

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  2. Posted: September 19, 2018In: Thriller

    When a single mother investigates her son?s claim that he was murdered in his past life, she inadvertently implicates her self in the unsolved crime and becomes the number one suspect. To prove her innocence, they go on the run, determined to find the real killer before a hard as nails detective can bring them in.

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    Added an answer on September 19, 2018 at 10:11 am

    At 56 words this is way too long for a logline.? And too complicated to figure out in one read what the plot is. (A logline should never take more than one read to understand.)? Please simplify.With loglines, less is more.

    At 56 words this is way too long for a logline.? And too complicated to figure out in one read what the plot is. (A logline should never take more than one read to understand.)? Please simplify.

    With loglines, less is more.

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  3. Posted: September 19, 2018In: Thriller

    A rookie female detective, out to prove herself, is tasked with protecting a single mother and her son when a serial killer learns that the young boy claims to be the re-incarnation of one of his victims, and tries to kill him again.

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    Added an answer on September 19, 2018 at 9:57 am

    Why would the detective believe his claim?? ?(Which is to ask, why would a movie audience buy into the premise?)It seems to me it would be more interesting if nobody believes him.? So he has no choice but to save himself.? IOW:? he's the protagonist.fwiw

    Why would the detective believe his claim?? ?(Which is to ask, why would a movie audience buy into the premise?)

    It seems to me it would be more interesting if nobody believes him.? So he has no choice but to save himself.? IOW:? he’s the protagonist.

    fwiw

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