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When twin sisters contest to get young rich person, they face chaotic life.
As midepedley85 said. Also loglines are about what characters intentionally seek to get or realize, not the unintended consequences that result, like chaos.
As midepedley85 said.
Also loglines are about what characters intentionally seek to get or realize, not the unintended consequences that result, like chaos.
See lessAfter giving nourishment and shelter to a wounded, fugitive vampire, a love-struck yet timid teen joins her quest: to assassinate her Sire before he starts a vampiric civil war.
>>>yet dangerous vampireBut not dangerous enough to defend herself?? So she needs the help of a timid guy, a mere mortal who initially doesn't pose a danger to anybody?? ? Seems like another plot that treads in the deep, deep, deep, deep rut of the trope of a guy who must man-up and rescueRead more
>>>yet dangerous vampire
But not dangerous enough to defend herself?? So she needs the help of a timid guy, a mere mortal who initially doesn’t pose a danger to anybody?? ? Seems like another plot that treads in the deep, deep, deep, deep rut of the trope of a guy who must man-up and rescue the girl who can never find the inner strength to rescue herself.? Or the guy.
(Sigh)
How about reversing roles and have the girl rescue the guy?
See lessForced to flee a city, an irresponsible young man finds himself standing up to sinister elements to save souls in a mysterious secluded town where no one is allowed to leave.
>>>man finds himselfPassive.? The plot is finding him. The protagonist needs to be proactive -- he needs to be in the drive's seat of the plot with hands on the wheel steering -- plots aren't supposed to run on autopilot.And as noted, "sinister elements" is vague. Be specific.? We have no iRead more
>>>man finds himself
Passive.? The plot is finding him. The protagonist needs to be proactive — he needs to be in the drive’s seat of the plot with hands on the wheel steering — plots aren’t supposed to run on autopilot.
And as noted, “sinister elements” is vague. Be specific.? We have no idea why he had to flee the city nor what he must fight against in the town.
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