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When a son is chosen to take over his father’s billion dollar company, he must adjust to the world of business and his newfound power.
As the others have said. And the logline needs to have stakes.So, what that he must "adjust"?? What does he stand to? lose if he doesn't? (Nothing less than everything will do.)? What does he stand to gain if he does?? (His biggest dream.? What is it?)
As the others have said. And the logline needs to have stakes.
So, what that he must “adjust”?? What does he stand to? lose if he doesn’t? (Nothing less than everything will do.)? What does he stand to gain if he does?? (His biggest dream.? What is it?)
See lessAfter John F. Kennedy’s assassination, Jackie Kennedy struggles with grief, faith and politics to define and protect her husband’s legacy.
After her husband's assassination, Jackie Kennedy fights through grief and trauma to retain her faith, console her children, and define her husband's historic legacy. (24 words) An instance when the IMDB blurb is just about good enough for a logline.
After her husband’s assassination, Jackie Kennedy fights through grief and trauma to retain her faith, console her children, and define her husband’s historic legacy.
(24 words)
An instance when the IMDB blurb is just about good enough for a logline.
See lessWhen a dangerous CME is earthbound, and a satellite reflector won’t work, NASA, learning they have four days till impact, release a female hacker from prison, to find the problem and save the planet.
I, too, had to? google the acronym, something a logline should not make a reader have to do. And, as the others, said, the visual aspect in terms of the action of the protagonist? are weak. There are also technical issues which, in my mind, elevate the story to the genre of sci-fi, not mere drama.
I, too, had to? google the acronym, something a logline should not make a reader have to do.
And, as the others, said, the visual aspect in terms of the action of the protagonist? are weak.
There are also technical issues which, in my mind, elevate the story to the genre of sci-fi, not mere drama.
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