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  1. Posted: July 15, 2018In: Examples

    When her son is kidnapped, the distraught mother must beg her tight-fisted father-in-law, J. Paul Getty, the world?s richest man, to pay the ransom.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 16, 2018 at 7:18 am

    >>> but ?to beg her father-in-law? doesn?t seem like an act which can sustain an entire feature filmThat's the plot line.? She begs, beseeches him over and over to meet the kidnappers demands of a $17 million ransom to free his grandson.? Which is eventually discounted to $3 million? - pockRead more

    >>> but ?to beg her father-in-law? doesn?t seem like an act which can sustain an entire feature film

    That’s the plot line.? She begs, beseeches him over and over to meet the kidnappers demands of a $17 million ransom to free his grandson.? Which is eventually discounted to $3 million? – pocket change for him. But as she is divorced from J. Paul Getty’ son and alienated from J. Paul Getty, he won’t ante up the ransom.

    >>but I didn?t know who ?Getty? was
    But anyone in Hollyweird with the clout to greenlight the project would as the Roman villa he built in Malibu became the Getty museum after his death.

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  2. Posted: July 15, 2018In: SciFi

    When ruthless alien killers with chameleon abilities escape to Earth, an elite, combat security officer must kill or recapture them before they slaughter the humans that get in their way

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    Added an answer on July 15, 2018 at 7:23 am

    Yes, it's an improvement.? But what seems to be the primary objective goal, "ship's future attack plans", remains vague undefined.? The escapees seem to be a complication , an intermediate problem, that needs to be resolved before the "attack plans" can be successfully carried out.? Against whom?? FRead more

    Yes, it’s an improvement.? But what seems to be the primary objective goal, “ship’s future attack plans”, remains vague undefined.? The escapees seem to be a complication , an intermediate problem, that needs to be resolved before the “attack plans” can be successfully carried out.? Against whom?? For what purpose, the objective goal of the attacks — what’s the end game?? Is there a ticking clock? Why now– what’s the urgency??

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  3. Posted: July 13, 2018In: SciFi

    Adar, an alien assassin, transports to Earth seeking three killers with chameleon abilities who escaped his ship. Adar must find his prey quickly before many of Earth?s inhabitants are slaughtered or live with dishonor.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 14, 2018 at 12:58 am

    If he's an assassin why didn't he fulfill his job definition and just kill them from the gitgo rather take them captive so they could escape?? ?Isn't that what assassins are supposed to do, take lives, not prisoners?And it seems to me that he's the one who has the problem of dishonor, for not doingRead more

    If he’s an assassin why didn’t he fulfill his job definition and just kill them from the gitgo rather take them captive so they could escape?? ?Isn’t that what assassins are supposed to do, take lives, not prisoners?

    And it seems to me that he’s the one who has the problem of dishonor, for not doing his job right, for letting them get away.

    And what’s the story hook?? What differentiates this story from all the other stories about good guys going after bad guys?

    fwiw

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