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When a teenager shows up engaged, his possessive single mother fakes her love for his fianc?’s single dad, to foil their premature marriage
>>>It?s her objective goal to fake it so he cannot marry her step sister (legally speaking)I think it would make for an interesting story if the teenage kids fall in love after their parents do.? Talk about complications.fwiw
>>>It?s her objective goal to fake it so he cannot marry her step sister (legally speaking)
I think it would make for an interesting story if the teenage kids fall in love after their parents do.? Talk about complications.
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See lessA frustrated impecunious & impartial father of five try to remain optimistic about fatherhood while constantly battling two quarrelsome, malicious, and sullen progenitors. (Previously defeated by the first mother of two) the court system, time and false molestation accusations by the second mom is pushing him closer to the edge of self destruction and fantasies of death to both progenitors.
>>>its his ex wife and previous children's mother that?s interfering with him raising his children and its causing him to self destruct, charges were never placed against the protagonist .This makes him appear passive, a? weak, reactive victim of other people rather than a protagonist.? A pRead more
>>>its his ex wife and previous children’s mother that?s interfering with him raising his children and its causing him to self destruct, charges were never placed against the protagonist .
This makes him appear passive, a? weak, reactive victim of other people rather than a protagonist.? A protagonist is a proactive character; that is, the character who sits in the driver’s seat of the plot and steers it toward a specific destination, a specific objective goal.? ?This rendition seems to put the women in the driver’s seat of the plot and their objective goal seems to be to run over him.
It’s okay for him to be afflicted by his ex’s with emotional and financial grief.? But what does he do about it?? He’s got to keep them out of the driver’s seat, keep both hands on the wheel and drive the story in the direction HE wants to go.
Where does he want to go?? What is his? objective goal?
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See lessEdited: When an seasoned womanizer transforms his female best friend from a clinger to a player and finds himself attracted to his new creation, but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst than he imagined.
How about something like:On a bet, a charming womanizer accepts the challenge to transform a clinger into player only to have her play his heart when he falls in love with his creation. (30 words)"Only to have"? = ironic and unintentional role reversal (and poetic pay back): the player who manipulatRead more
How about something like:
On a bet, a charming womanizer accepts the challenge to transform a clinger into player only to have her play his heart when he falls in love with his creation.
(30 words)
“Only to have”? = ironic and unintentional role reversal (and poetic pay back): the player who manipulates women’s hearts gets? his own heart manipulated by his creation.
“On a bet” = the inciting incident.? Gotta have a reason why he? would deign to invest his time, effort and “human relationship” expertise on a woman whom he would initially have no respect for, no interest in.
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