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A vengeful young woman with a grudge about being conceived by anonymous sperm donation tracks down her biological father, who is now a successful gynaecologist, and plots with her scheming mother to take the place of his wife and daughter.
Agree with variable.?The daughter would seem to be antagonist, not a protagonist.? She does not seem to be a sympathetic character.? Her grudge is misplaced: after all, without his sperm donation she wouldn't even exist.? And her objective goal is malevolent. And that he's an arrogant prick? is notRead more
Agree with variable.?The daughter would seem to be antagonist, not a protagonist.? She does not seem to be a sympathetic character.? Her grudge is misplaced: after all, without his sperm donation she wouldn’t even exist.? And her objective goal is malevolent. And that he’s an arrogant prick? is not enough to? justify her goal in the eyes of an audience.? Because, again, whatever his motives were, whatever his character attributes, the fact is if he hadn’t made the donation, she would not exist.
It seems to me that the logline should .be framed from the father’s pov.
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How long is his sentence?? Or when can he be up for parole? (IOW: is there a tickling clock running in the plot, a countdown to a day when his sentence will be complete and he will be released?) Is there anyone on the outside who? working to discover new evidence to win his release?? Or is he doomedRead more
How long is his sentence?? Or when can he be up for parole? (IOW: is there a tickling clock running in the plot, a countdown to a day when his sentence will be complete and he will be released?)
Is there anyone on the outside who? working to discover new evidence to win his release?? Or is he doomed to serve his sentence, at least until he becomes eligibile for? parole?
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So... the parents are perfect and they're the rulers -- but they don't have enough power, and they aren't perfect enough to free themselves from ruling, to prevent being assimilated?And by ruling the parents seem to be performing a valuable service for the elves, maintaining peace and harmony.? So wRead more
So… the parents are perfect and they’re the rulers — but they don’t have enough power, and they aren’t perfect enough to free themselves from ruling, to prevent being assimilated?
And by ruling the parents seem to be performing a valuable service for the elves, maintaining peace and harmony.? So why must their kids rescue them??
What is the dramatic problem in this scenario?
It seems like a dramatic problem will be created if the kids retrieve their parents because then the hard won peace and harmony will be lost without them.
This just doesn’t compute for me.? Of course, you can make up your own rules for how your imaginary world works, but the rules must be consistently applied; once you make them, you can’t break them. And I’m just not sure what the rules are.
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