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Based on Actual Events: Guilty of accidentally killing a black postal worker, a tobacco salesman politically awakens after his acquittal by a white court in Apartheid South Africa and joins a resistance group only to be caught, tortured and exiled for planning a terrorist attack against the regime.
Well, what must he do after being exiled?? Surely,? the story doesn't end with his exile.Also how does his acquittal make him "woke"?? He beat the rap, didn't he?? ?The balance of justice tipped in his favor even though it happened in a white court.What is the cause and effect relationship between hRead more
Well, what must he do after being exiled?? Surely,? the story doesn’t end with his exile.
Also how does his acquittal make him “woke”?? He beat the rap, didn’t he?? ?The balance of justice tipped in his favor even though it happened in a white court.
What is the cause and effect relationship between his acquittal and his radicalization?? What is the personal injustice that motivates him to join the resistance?
See lessAfter a former white supremacist is nursed back to health by a rural African American family, from a deadly bear attack, he must choose between his heart or allegiance when his former gang threatens to kill his new found family.
As? Karel pointed out in the online YouTube session, "must choose" is about one moment in a? story.? But the purpose of a logline is to describe a course of dramatic action constituting hundreds of moments extending the full span of a story.And we know he's going to choose to save his saviors, rightRead more
As? Karel pointed out in the online YouTube session, “must choose” is about one moment in a? story.? But the purpose of a logline is to describe a course of dramatic action constituting hundreds of moments extending the full span of a story.
And we know he’s going to choose to save his saviors, right?? It’s no mystery what he will decide to do. So:
After being saved from a mortal injury by a poor, rural African-American? family, a white supremacist must save them from his fellow racists who want to lynch them.
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Implied in that is a? 180 degree character arc on the part of the racist, the subjective story line, what he needs to overcome.? But loglines focus on the objective goal, not the subjective need.
fwiw
See lessWhen a young priest that has impregnated a young immigrant Nun, he must defend her from his Church until legal proceedings stop his former Bishop from interfering in the raising of their child.
>>>interfering in the raising of their child.Interfere how?? I presume the bishop wants to consign the bastard child to a wretched orphanage since Nuns can't keep their illegitimate offstpring -- unless they leave the order.
>>>interfering in the raising of their child.
Interfere how?? I presume the bishop wants to consign the bastard child to a wretched orphanage since Nuns can’t keep their illegitimate offstpring — unless they leave the order.
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