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  1. Posted: December 8, 2017In: SciFi

    A young woman in search of her parents finds herself in a fight for her life when an extraterrestrial warrior believe her to be a legendary weapon created to defend against the invader.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 17, 2017 at 10:39 am

    >>>A tenacious young woman discovers she?s half human How could she not know growing up she's not a normal human? It seems to me the discovery that would kick off the plot is her finding out WHY she's half-human.? And she would find that out when the ET. returns to claim her as fully matureRead more

    >>>A tenacious young woman discovers she?s half human

    How could she not know growing up she’s not a normal human?

    It seems to me the discovery that would kick off the plot is her finding out WHY she’s half-human.? And she would find that out when the ET. returns to claim her as fully matured “weapon” or whatever they designed her to be.

    So her backstory could be that she was hidden on earth to incubate and have the time to develop into what they genetically engineered her to become.? Which, in human terminology, would be to become a mighty super warrior.

    Upon reflection, I think you have the germ of a? viable idea.? And if you engineer the plot and character well enough, she could become the basis for a franchise, a series of films. (From the pov of the Hollyweird moneymen, it’s a terrible waste of a super character if her dramatic destiny plays out in? one picture.)

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: December 15, 2017In: Horror

    God?s Law

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    Added an answer on December 17, 2017 at 9:48 am

    What's the dramatic point of trying to persuade the police?? If the culprit is supernatural, the police are powerless to do anything.? He's wasting his time (and the audience's) exploring an option he knows they are powerless to do anything about.Seems to me the logline should cut to the chase:? he'Read more

    What’s the dramatic point of trying to persuade the police?? If the culprit is supernatural, the police are powerless to do anything.? He’s wasting his time (and the audience’s) exploring an option he knows they are powerless to do anything about.

    Seems to me the logline should cut to the chase:? he’s got to whatever has to be done, confront the supernatural whatever-it-is himself.

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  3. Posted: December 16, 2017In: Thriller

    When her brother?s long-lost diary reveals the location of diamonds worth millions, a tenacious art forgery expert looking for her long lost family must to outsmart a nefarious, shadowy government organization and confront her past in order to unravel a decades-old international crime masterminded by her father.

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    Added an answer on December 17, 2017 at 9:41 am

    What's her motive?? To grab the jewels for herself?? Or to restore them to the rightful owner?

    What’s her motive?? To grab the jewels for herself?? Or to restore them to the rightful owner?

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