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When a new drug augmenting reality hits the market, a young lawyer stifled by his career takes the drug and stumbles upon a door to a different plane of existence, where he encounters a young woman who will stop at nothing to defend her village against the specter of a demon.
Agree with CraigDGriffiths that the logline needs to cut to the chase, get to what the plot is about.His version also assays to correct another problem.? ?That is, "he encounters a young woman who will stop at nothing to defend her village against the specter of a demon" seems to pass the baton of tRead more
Agree with CraigDGriffiths that the logline needs to cut to the chase, get to what the plot is about.
His version also assays to correct another problem.? ?That is, “he encounters a young woman who will stop at nothing to defend her village against the specter of a demon” seems to pass the baton of the action? to the young woman.
Who owns the story, the guy or the gal?
And what dog does he have in the fight?? What the personal hook, the personal stakes for him that he should get involved?? How does it become his fight also where he has as much on the line as she does?
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I like "brutal" better than corrupt to describe the prison.? Or maybe "brutal and corrupt".But I don't think he was the victim of a corrupt justice system. The judicial process failed but that doesn't mean that the process was corrupt. The circumstantial evidence implicated him and he didn't offer aRead more
I like “brutal” better than corrupt to describe the prison.? Or maybe “brutal and corrupt”.
But I don’t think he was the victim of a corrupt justice system. The judicial process failed but that doesn’t mean that the process was corrupt. The circumstantial evidence implicated him and he didn’t offer a vigorous defense.
And I stand by my earlier statement about “proving his innocence”.
I have no problems with “reserved” because what initially seems to be a character weakness turns out to be a character strength.? His? inclination to think before he acts, think before he speaks turns out to be a key to his success. He “picks” his way to freedom without making a rash move or statement that would blow his plan.
I can only identify one moment when he acts rashly:? he plays a record of Mozart’s? music over the prison? PA system — a defiant gesture at the system and the warden.? (A moment of emotional catharsis evoked by music that is fairly common in the midpoint sequence of film, I’ve noticed.)? ?It costs him 2 weeks in the cooler.? But at no time, in no way, does he do or say anything that would threaten to expose his escape plan.
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>>>I think it?s about the relationship between the two men. Not how he got there.Although the "B" story is? central to the film, loglines are about the "A" story.?
>>>I think it?s about the relationship between the two men. Not how he got there.
Although the “B” story is? central to the film, loglines are about the “A” story.
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