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A womanizer music mogul, finds himself wrapped up in a sexual abuse scandal after finding true love with a beautiful singer who shapes him into a better man.
Agree with Nir Shelter: "it?s worth noting that if he is guilty I?m not sure that the audience would care much for his story."In the current zeitgeist,? I think that renders the story DOA.Also the original logline makes the love interest? the protagonist character rather than the mogul.? She's taskeRead more
Agree with Nir Shelter: “it?s worth noting that if he is guilty I?m not sure that the audience would care much for his story.”
In the current zeitgeist,? I think that renders the story DOA.
Also the original logline makes the love interest? the protagonist character rather than the mogul.? She’s tasked with the stereotypical role of being his rescuer.? If she’s a better person than he is, why doesn’t she engineer his overthrow and take over the business herself?
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Your story seems to depend on a lot of coincidental circumstances and corrupt people conspiring against the young man.A lot.What's the dramatic point you are trying to make having an entire community willfully aligned against the student?
Your story seems to depend on a lot of coincidental circumstances and corrupt people conspiring against the young man.
A lot.
What’s the dramatic point you are trying to make having an entire community willfully aligned against the student?
See lessWhen an exiled prince unexpectedly becomes ruler in a foreign kingdom, he must make dangerous alliances if he is to survive the vampire Emperor who murdered his parents.
>>>unexpectedly becomes rulerHow?What is the causal relationship between the inciting incident and the objective goal?And what is the young man's objective goal?? Surely not to make alliances -- isn't that is a stratagem, a means to achieve his objective goal??
>>>unexpectedly becomes ruler
How?
What is the causal relationship between the inciting incident and the objective goal?
And what is the young man’s objective goal?? Surely not to make alliances — isn’t that is a stratagem, a means to achieve his objective goal??
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