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  1. Posted: November 2, 2017In: SciFi

    A bitter old man plays an advanced virtual reality game and conquers his fear of technology.

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    Added an answer on November 4, 2017 at 11:34 am

    It seems like your looking for a good excuse -- aka: an inciting incident -- that plausibly and logically causes the geezer to play the game.? I would point out that there is a distinct difference between avoiding technology out of fear and avoiding it out of disinterest.? It's not necessarily a chaRead more

    It seems like your looking for a good excuse — aka: an inciting incident — that plausibly and logically causes the geezer to play the game.? I would point out that there is a distinct difference between avoiding technology out of fear and avoiding it out of disinterest.? It’s not necessarily a character flaw to eschew having a cell phone or a Facebook account.? ?It could be a character strength to be able to resist the time and money consuming seductions of modern technology.

    Also, who is the target movie audience?? If the protagonist is an old man, why would young people care to watch the movie?? And why would old people want to watch someone like them being forced to immerse himself in VR against his will?? Someone like them being shown to be an antiquated fool?? Why would old people want him to succeed in mastering VR?

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  2. Posted: November 3, 2017In: Thriller

    A college student fights false accusations of rape against corrupted councelor and his rapist son to clear his reputation as stakes go higher with upcoming town elections.

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    Added an answer on November 4, 2017 at 11:16 am

    What about the victim?? Why doesn't she clear his name?? If the son was the one who raped the woman, and the student save her, why isn't she defending the student's innocence?? There can only be a legal case if she's pressing charges against the student.

    What about the victim?? Why doesn’t she clear his name?? If the son was the one who raped the woman, and the student save her, why isn’t she defending the student’s innocence?? There can only be a legal case if she’s pressing charges against the student.

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  3. Posted: November 2, 2017In: Thriller

    A workaholic businesswoman changes lifestyle after her husband dies but when she suspects he faked his death she has to find him before her company does.

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    Added an answer on November 4, 2017 at 11:13 am

    Why does she think he's dead just because he's disappeared?? A missing person isn't necessarily mean a dead one.

    Why does she think he’s dead just because he’s disappeared?? A missing person isn’t necessarily mean a dead one.

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